Now that's out of the way, I loved it. It's very promising already, and I love the Dumbles already knows her name and that she's quite in character with the emotional upheaval of the episode. Waiting to see what you do with it.
Review of chapter "I broke the rule" from AllenPitt
Review:
huh...which leaves the Master taking over Sunnydale, with Xander/Angel wasting time trying to find her in the caves... then again Dumbledore seems to know something... and hey, in the past, so she might eventually get back to the right time.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Jan 10] • Not Rated