Oh Andrew! He's going to be in so much trouble. I wonder what he meant to happen? Cause I don't think he meant for Dawn to be sucked into a portal... At least I don't think he did...
Poor Dawn though. Her emotions in this, her feelings of inadequacy with herself and her worth, was very well written. Great job.
Anyways, this was a wonderful little fic!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Hey, I've read the first three in your The Rules We Break series and I really enjoyed them. It sucks that I don't watch Prison Break! I may have to start just to read the next story! Good Work!
It's official. We need to kill Andrew. I know he was trying to help but come on! Argh. Okay, patiently waiting the next part. :) Thanks for sharing. Amberle
Review By [AmberleRose] • Date [13 Jan 10] • Not Rated