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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Really good story.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [8 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DieselDriver
Review:
I like the story, the writing is good, but one little detail in the first chapter bugs me. A rifle is not a shotgun and a shotgun is not a rifle. Near the beginning you have Xander "staring down the barrel of a shotgun" and near the end of the chapter you refer to Bobbie having a rifle, "threaten Xander with a rifle for Sam". The terms are not interchangeable. If you can edit you should because the rest of it is really thought provoking. I'd love to hear the conversation between Dean and Dawn. Oh cool... D&D. That could work. What kind of children would they make... LOL
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from trudy
Review:
Great story, and you mentioned a possible sequel, I'd love to read it if you wrote one, especially if there was slash involved.
Review By [trudy] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Muffie
Review:
Excellent story! I'm not into Supernatural so much, but your story hooked me into the characters. I enjoyed it very much.
Review By [Muffie] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Xayian
Review:
OMG! This will be difficult, to review in rhyme
I should take a class,
but I fear there's no time.

So ok friend, I'll have a go.
I'll rhyme a review,
just don't throw me in a hole.

I like this fic, really I do!
So much so,
I've read it times two

Love what you've done, the idea does rock!
The thought you've put in it?
Enough to rival Spock!

A sequel would be nice, if you were so inclined.
Not asking for much,
just an emo Dean land mine.

Come on, it's Dean! Season 2 black and white!
Do you really think he'd adjust,
without a major life crisis fight?

Throw in some Dawn, to pull him from the ledge.
Keep him away from the crossroads,
Removing the balance on life's razor edge.

So there you have it, my rhyme of review.
Hope it didn't suck,
or make you spew.

:o)

So...sequel?
Review By [Xayian] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Allyndra
Review:
This story is amazing. Saw it recced on fancake (dreamwidth) and came over to check it out, and wow. So well done!

Thanks for sharing!
Review By [Allyndra] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Geyer
Review:
I loved this story. You did a fantastic job all the way through--plot, characters, dialogue. Thanks for posting it.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from wswords
Review:
Damn, that was good.
Review By [wswords] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from purrfus
Review:
Wow.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from shinysolace
Review:
Possibly, probably, the most original story I've read... in a long time, if not ever. Normally you can at least guess the bones of a crossover or interaction if not the details, but this totally threw me- I sooo didn't see it coming and would never have thought of it or anticipated anything like it. Also, the reasoning behind Sams wish, to get a buffer between him and his dad, totally logical and believeable, and exactly the role that Dean did play when the three of them were together...
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RachelleRyan
Review:
Very nice. I especially like the title, creative and leading. The story is equally creative and I get the feeling a sequel would be just as interesting. Thank you for your efforts.
Review By [RachelleRyan] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ktweaver
Review:
Wow. I think I went through most of the list of emotions reading this. Wonderfully done! Loved the twist with Sam's wish
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ktweaver
Review:
Wow. I think I went through most of the list of emotions reading this. Wonderfully done! Loved the twist with Sam's wish
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Great story line--very original. I really enjoyed it. Nicely done!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
*whistles* Damn. *whistles again* This was beautifully characterized, well written and very poignant. Beautifully done all the way around, thank you for sharing! *off to rec this one*
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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