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Review of story "Can death stop a life bond?" from Fenni
Review:
Did they get permission to enter St. Louise from the Master? Since they are bringing a half-vampire and few other supernatural beings. If they didn't then it is against the rules for them to enter without permission. And Asher would be in shock or pissed off. Cause here is his love alive, the one he thought dead for at least a hundred years. Anyway good story; Update as soon when your ready to and not sooner then that.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the ideas. Yes they got permission i didn't go into much detail, thats back at the end of ch. 2.
Review By [Fenni] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "From London to LA" from liit
Review:
Hi i like the story but at least you could of warn us that this is sort of buffy bashing...
Comments from author:
opps. guess i forgot to put that in there. thanks for the review though.
Im not setting out to bash Buffy shes just not seeing the difference in the vampire lines. She will be more herself after meeting the master.
Review By [liit] • Date [19 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From London to LA" from JediKnight
Review:
Good idea, but it seems a bit fast paced, hope you'll add more soon. Also you have this labeled as a "Buffy" crossover, when might the "Buffy" characters come in?
Comments from author:
I know that its fast paced but i want to get them to LA quickly. Next chapter Gunn and Angelus show up
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "From London to LA" from Emeraldiceus
Review:
I Like it good Start. As for the bonus Ramirez’s name is from Highlander (Conner's teacher), an Arcerian tiger is a kindred from the Black Jewel Books, and the town in Texas that they show up at in 1988 I don't know what thats from
Comments from author:
thanks for the review. good job on getting the references. city shows up in chpt 2.

you get cake and icecream!
Review By [Emeraldiceus] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From London to LA" from Moonlost
Review:
Good start, It will be interesting to see where you go with the story.
Comments from author:
thanks for the review i've got another 3 pgs handwriten i'm trying to get them typed up.
Review By [Moonlost] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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