Having recently watched Avatar (again) on DVD made me think of this story. It's a really great story and I hope you come back to it soon.

I like the conflict between Dawn and her new family. It is really dramatic and emotionally-gripping. Still, I think that you should bring up Dawn's feelings for Joyce more, and have it conflict with her loving 'mother'. I also found the contact from Willow to be an unexpected yet pleasant surprise. However, I think that it might have been better with a lack of communication between the Scoobies and Dawn; I was somewhat looking forward to them bursting into Pandora to 'rescue' Dawn.

It's so good to see a new chapter to this! I loved it by the way :) Great twist too with Willow at the end, I love that she found a way to find Dawn, or at least communicate with her. Also fantastic job portraying Dawn's breakdown, the poor thing has been through a lot in a very short amount of time, it makes sense that she would eventually lose it. Well done.

Anyway, thanks for the awesome update... I can't wait to read what happens next, especially the 'talk' between Dawn and Willow!!

I'm loving this story so far! It's not common to see Avatar crossovers but you are doing a great job of it! I hope you finish it.

Glad to see you're still working on this one. I'm really curious how the conversation will go, especially since Dawn's feeling so homesick right now.

I'd love to see this continued some day, but since it's been eight months, I guess I won't hold out hope. Still, if you do write more, I'd be more than happy to read it!

I'm pretty sure at this point that I'm just going to go down your list of stories and read every one that's in a fandom I know. Your crossovers are surprisingly well-thought-out when compared to most others I've read. Even the ones where you just wrote a few chapters and moved on to something else.

hold onto hope - only one of my stories is abandoned, and that's because I stopped writing slash. So I will be updating 'Home' at some point soon - I've actually got the next chapter half written! I'm just a little stuck. It will happen! But at the moment I have three language exams in the next week, then four more two weeks after that (GAHHH!) and unless I decided that some quality procrastination is in order, it may not happen for a while :) Thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi

good story.
added to tracking.

Interesting... Very interesting.

I have seen only a few Avatar crosses so far. This 1 has the majority of my attention so far.

More, please?

now this is interesting.

dawn, a na'vi, time and interplanetary travel.

cool.

more please.

wow! this is the first time i'm reading a avatar xover with Buffy!! please update it soon!!

Oh wow, this is amazing especially considering the movie hasn't even been released into stores yet. How did you manage to do all this without the movie as a reference?

Ummm....I'veseenitthreetimes? In 3D? It was just too good, I had to do it!

Thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi

Great chapter! I wonder if Dawn is going to be "stuck" in time and space at the end of the story.

Please continue.

Oh, and on the previous reviewer's remark about the BEC just using smart bombs - these require GPS (up to 32 satellites and two ground control stations, which Galileo in Europe is building now, from scratch, at a cost of 4.75 billion dollars) or someone marking the targets on the ground with a laser. ;)

So Eway also wants to save Earth? I like the idea, but I'm quite curious to see how you're going to pull it off, with the 200 years inbetween Dawn and Willow. Willow would definately be all for the idea, I would imagine. Really looking forward to the next installment.

I am very much enjoying this story.

I love it! I've never read a Na'vi crossover before :)