Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dogbertcarroll
Good choice of crossover characters.
Review By [dogbertcarroll
] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Nice crossover with The Mummy! Since Evie still looks so well, I'm assuming that all of that time investigating the mysteries and curses of Egypt may have given her and Rick a bit of longevity. I like how seriously or professionally Xander takes things. He's not a thief. He's staking vampires. It is highly likely that any items that they have may be intended to be used for evil or just cursed. Xander was careful with the items and located an expert to examine and advise him on the objects. I recognized the Ribbon Device. That device is used as a weapon by the goa'uld on Stargate. I guess there will be a cross with that show at some point. I also thought that Xander was very clever for how he dealt with Willy. He assessed his prey and found a weak point to exploit. Xander knew he couldn't physically intimidate Willy, but the threat of using legal or official means to bring down someone who deals in shady buisiness is definitely an adequate threat. I noticed the stranger that was noticing Xander too. Whoever it was made a note to himself to keep his own dealings hidden from Xander. He also made a note to keep an eye on Xander. As a future recruit or employee perhaps? Or, as a possible future enemy to remove? Xander is living in interesting times.
Review By [kayron
] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Doraemax
This is a wonderful series. Short but beautifully written. Although instead of 1 chap per different stories, it would make more sense to have many chapters per 1 story (easier to keep track of as well).
I particularly like this chapter as i am a fan of both the mummy and stargate. I won't comment on whole timeframe for the mummy thing. but it would be nice to see a more direct interaction with daniel from stargate. maybe it can be shown in a companion-fic where evellyn's research caught the eye of daniel jackson and he came to meet evellyn to discuss the bracelet thingy (i forgot the name).
anyway, i gave this series a solid 7. Might be an 8 or higher depends on the series development. keep up the great work and thank you for a good story
Review By [Doraemax
] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]