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Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from Zith
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This is a good one--well written with an interesting pairing. I reread it again today, and was motivated to encourage you to write more. Tell me you have not given up on it and are still going to continue it? I really want to see more Alice/Xander/Jasper!
Review By [Zith] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from fanficfreak
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Now, this is a pairing I could get behind! Alice/Xander/Jasper? Hot.

Is there going to be any more to this?
Review By [fanficfreak] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from AXanFan
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This is interesting -- I have never been fond of Xander's previous possessions causing too many changes in him -- I hope the changes won't be too drastic -- Xander's humanity is one of the things that makes him "special" -- you know, his ability to overcome, survive and even save/help others.

I like the idea of Xander having a cousin that he gets along so well with. Glad Charlie is going to give him a chance.

I'm guessing this is going to be a series of stories rather than chapters of one story -- hope you write more soon.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from twlight
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I love this story. The fact that Jasper is relaxed around Xander is wonderful. I really loved what Xander did when Jasper said something to him the first time. gave me a big grin. I am eagerly awaiting the next in this series.
Review By [twlight] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from ManyNamedChibi
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.... That is sooo sweet. I'd like to hear more about the Sunnydale crew's reactions to this though. And a reason not even Willow has tried to contact him.
Review By [ManyNamedChibi] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from (Past Donor)MistressAshley
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This is great. Everyone seems to be branching out into Buffy/Twilight but it's like no one can get over Edward. It's nice, more than nice, to see something different. Also love how you paired Xan with both Alice and Jasper and not just one or the other. It's a perfect pairing, absolutely adorable. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next installment. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)MistressAshley] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from DoubleKross
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A really interesting crossover, but it really needs to be cleaned up. You have a lot of spelling and grammar issues. On top of that, your story starts off okay, but closer to the end, you resort to "telling, not showing" like you were getting bored... consequently, the second half of the story is not nearly as interesting.

I'd suggest you go back over it, clean up the spelling and grammar and flesh it out a little bit more, because it really is an intriguing situation that you've set up--it deserves some more time and attention.
Review By [DoubleKross] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from Crydwyn
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Nicely written, an enjoyable read. The only thing that I felt was missing was more detail on Xander getting to know the Cullens more etc. it seemed a little abrupt how close they became, also rather mysterious as you'd think Alice and Jasper would at least need some time to become accepting of the idea that their paring might be moving towards a trio....

Ill be looking forwards to your next installment (I assume there will be one :D)
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from DarkFaerieYumi
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pretty! I loved it! I can't wait for the next story!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from CronosKitty
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aww .. it was going so good. Just when you get to the good parts you end it? Sequel... yes..? Hope so and hope soon. Would love to see the developing relationship and how Xander reacts to a triad.
Review By [CronosKitty] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from grrovvyhevens
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Yes. Yes. Yes.
Review By [grrovvyhevens] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from speediebuffy
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I'm so hooked with this story, Love it, keep the updates coming...
Review By [speediebuffy] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
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This was awesome! I loved it! Great writing! :D
Ryen
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from silvergaurd
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Fantastic love it! Can't wait to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fading Light of Day" from nightslayer
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loved it and i hope you continue 'cause it was great!! Not like anything i've ever read!
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [23 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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