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Review of chapter "Time Warp" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
I come back for a re-read from time to time. I never regret it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time Warp" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
This was awesome, thank for sharing!

Cheers~!
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time Warp" from SamuraiSky
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Joe, you never fail to deliver a good story. This was excellent. Thank you for the good read!
Comments from author:
Glad to deliver. :)
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time Warp" from TheKnightofFaerie
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Can I just say "What the?!" Fun story though.
Comments from author:
I excel at "What the fun?!" stories. ^_^
Review By [TheKnightofFaerie] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time Warp" from Harry
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I think that Dawn fits in quite nicely with this family. And if anyone has a problem with that, take it up with her parents: Janet Pym and Illryia/Winifrerd Burkle!
Comments from author:
Well, Janet Burkle or perhaps Janet and Illyria van Dyne. They are married, so Janet wouldn't keep her first husband's name.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Pleasuredome" from Harry
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I recognized Brian Braddock and his father from the Captain Britain comic books and from Excalibur. And changing realities: HEADACHE CITY!
Comments from author:
Well, he has his own origin and nature in the Ultimate Universe that I presented exactly here. He's just a scientist and superhero.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time Warp" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ok, I don't know whether to squeal with glee due to the update, or curse and moan due to there being no more updates. Hmm, squeal with glee it is. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Well, it was marked Completed before, too. I still have another chunk set one year after the reality reboot on my hard drive; I'd need to create a few pieces of filler to connect it organically to the existing fic, which is why it's not part of this update. Who knows, though. Maybe I'll find the time...
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [14 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time Warp" from Selonianth
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Illyria Logic. Gotta love it. I just wish she'd added a "Cause... Dat Ass." in there somewhere. And then explained it as trying to fit in to earth culture a bit more.
Comments from author:
Well, Dawn's the "dat ass" kind of girl. Illyria... may or may not share Janet's taste in big-breasted women. We're never actually told which valkyrie she'd want for herself, just that she knows which one would appeal to her wife.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [14 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time Warp" from Meneldur
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Dead tired by now, work and Memorial Day tomorrow.. so just wanted to drop in and say I liked this ending. It felt a bit more complete, somehow, though it took me a second to realize what was going on. I liked the other superheroines we got to see as well, they seemed like great fun. Thanks for giving this the ending it deserved. The rest of your updates, I'll see to tomorrow.
Comments from author:
Like I mentioned to someone else, there's another piece I could add to it that's set a year after the reboot. I just would need to do some writing to connect it to this, or else we end up with that awkward "oh, the world's changed a ton in the last six months but I'm not gonna show you anything and just make off-handed comments as pseudo-exposition".
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [14 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Pleasuredome" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Ooooohh! Me likey! More please!
Comments from author:
Look for it on Latest on April 13th...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Pleasuredome" from deathgeonous
Review:
This really needs to be continued. Not only is it a great source of fun, but you left off at a rather interesting point. Take Two needs more time! Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
This is another one where - quite honestly - I simply forgot it existed. I tend to pen off one-shot ideas that I intend to maybe expand someday, and then forget all about them.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Pleasuredome" from Netchka
Review:
Cool story! Can't wait for the next chapters to come. Please let them be soon? :-)
Comments from author:
Look for it on Latest on April 13th...
Review By [Netchka] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Pleasuredome" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Coolness. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you :)
Comments from author:
Look for it on Latest on April 13th...
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [30 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Pleasuredome" from Raider
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seriously, nice.

I for one would love to see this one revived from its slumber.
Comments from author:
Look for it on Latest on April 13th...
Review By [Raider] • Date [19 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take It Off" from dinamo
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I can't tell you enough how much I love this story. I read it when you originally posted it and loved it very much, I hope you'll be able to add the end on at some point.

Anything about Illyria and I love it, she's such an interesting character that you can put her into any environment and she just sees it all as being much and beneath her but in the end she gets involved in. she can't seem to help herself, even if its just to show the much how beneath her they are.
Comments from author:
Look for it on Latest on April 13th...
Review By [dinamo] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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