Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stationary
lol, that last line: "good boy". id love to see some kinky shit happening there. but i would really love to see even more, how totally paternal/maternal xander gets around naruto and gaara both once he realizes how much fate and peopel have screwed them over.
Review By [Stationary
] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CelebwenTelcontar
Please, please continue! I can't wait to see what happens to Xander, Naruto and Kakashi!
Review By [CelebwenTelcontar
] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alexandre
I'm liking it so far! I really am! In fact, I made my profile just so I could leave a review. :P Of course, that was also slightly because I have an overwhelming need to be helpful, and I realized you were looking for the word used for the headbands in Naruto, so... hitai-ate. That's what they're called. I really didn't expect to remember it, but I guess I had fun saying it in my head, when I first saw it 'cause... it really stuck. I think it reminded me of when my dad steals my pizza rolls. One would think that after the first three times of burning his tongue badly, he'd remember that when I pull them out of the oven, they're really hot. Heh. Oh, well. So, yeah. Good fic. I look forward to more! Please give me the pretties? *lip quivers*
EDIT: Uh... There's a reason my profile pic is of Xander. *sheepish grin* I learned to babble from watching Buffy. ^^
Review By [Alexandre
] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
Wow. Poor Xander. Lost in another world. Actually I'm lost in the Naruto portion of this. I never seen it and only read the first manga so I have NO clue about anything Naruto. But I read this cause it intrigued me. hope to know more soon.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [25 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calikocat
This seems pretty promising, and I especially liked Xander's unconscious use of chakra. Very neat.
Review By [calikocat
] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sunstar
Interestingly unique pairings and a foursome, a crossover with Xander in it and slash, along with being well written = I'm a happy happy reader =)
Review By [Sunstar
] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Caliadragon
This is fabulous! I really look forward to seeing what happens next.
Review By [Caliadragon
] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BilltheGood
I love it! Please update soon.
Review By [BilltheGood
] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VessaMorana
Definitely off to a good start. And I'm really kinda excited to see this pairing... grouping... whatever. Was the challenge just timing and pairing or was there more to it? And I can't wait to see Xander's reaction to Konoha and the fact that there are ninja... And what's up with him using chakra, evenly crudely?
Review By [VessaMorana
] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silvergaurd
fantastic start, can't wait to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd
] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MerKat
More please! Does Xander have the hyena and will his inner animal react to Naruto?
Review By [MerKat
] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]