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Review of chapter "Twitterpated" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Brilliant! :) I like this part:

Harry took her hand in both of his and squeezed gently. "I think you forget that I'm a guy and I do some stupid stuff. Sometimes I get myself into trouble or hurt, or I get someone else hurt. And today?" He paused and Dawn felt her heart sink further. "I don't think today was one of them. I mean, I'm really sorry you got banged up, I didn't get the angle quite right, but it could have been worse and I'm glad I got there in time. Dawn, I'm glad you're okay."

There was a pause as Dawn digested his words. "Harry?"

"Yeah?"

"I may have a concussion and I still feel a little loopy, but don't say something you don't want to. I mean, just because I'm all hurt and stuff doesn't mean I won't understand what you're saying, though I may think you're talking about something else and I could just be mistranslating 'cos of the bump so-" Dawn blushed when Harry put his finger against her lips, effectively stopping the babble before it could approach full speed.

"Dawn?"

"Yeah?"

"Shut up." He leaned forward and Dawn thought she was hallucinating but sure enough, Harry's lips touched hers and she felt herself go loopier still. Harry Potter was kissing her.

She pulled back and place a hand on his chest. "Hold on."

"What's wrong?" She looked at him in scrutiny and Harry squirmed a little. "What?"

"I'm just making sure this isn't some sort of joke, or that you're still alive."

"Dawn-"

"No, I'm serious. I've had almost as bad a run as Buffy when it comes to guys. When I was fifteen, I was going to become a demon's child bride. The first guy I kissed was a vampire. I made a fool out of myself in front of half the school because a guy was wearing an enchanted jacket. Buffy sent me to finish my schooling at an all girl's school and I still got into trouble."

"Dawn, you're not helping."

"I don't mean to, but come on, Harry. Look at you. You're this amazingly kind and generous person and my history's telling me that something has to go wrong."

"Well, I've always been rubbish at history." He moved her hand and kissed her again, and this time Dawn let him.

Wow -- how extraordinary! :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twitterpated" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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aw, redic cute!
Well, I've always been rubbish at history- that sounds like Harry.

And yeah, for a second I almost forgot Dawn's rubbish history. Even worse if you ever read the season 8 comic books (she slept with her bf's roommate so her bf turned her into a giant-lol)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twitterpated" from lmarie
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I automatically have to like it because you put in a 'that's what she said' joke. But seriously it was cute and funny! very Dawn with the awkward
Review By [lmarie] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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