Hmm. Very interesting concept but I do not understand why there are no spaces between paragraphs and so many spelling mistakes. Obviously this is an old story so I doubt you will be updating it but its a shame you can't beta this story or something. Lots of potential.
I know you haven't made anything new about this since 04 but I'd just thought to ask if I can be your Beta since your stuff especially this story are the coolness. . .
Any chance of getting more chapters sometime soon? This is a very interesting story idea, and I'd love to find out what happens in the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [18 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Wow, that was interesting to say the least. I think I've read this before, somewhere, do you have an acount on FF.nt? 'cause if not then someones stolen your fic. . . Wow, how gloom an doom I'm being. . Still, a very good fic!!
I just read the rest of your story and was suprised by the Dawn Snape-ness in it. But it's a really good story. Thanks for updating. Hope to read more soon.
I rate it six because there are still a lot of mistakes [which I don't hold against you but you should look into them.] Such things as "....." THE girl or woman or man etc, said.
Apart from that, I love this fic. I also like the Snape/Dawn pairing.
I think that if you are bringing Angel into it, he should be Harry's pairing. They'd look good together.
Review By [Nanashi] • Date [31 Jan 04] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of story "The real me" from Anonymous Reviewer
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The kiss didn't gross me out that much. *grin*
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The real me" from Anonymous Reviewer
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wow, blood tears, cool, and a neat way to end a chapter. i really really like the idea of snapeanddawn together but you have to have dawn fall for him slowly so that it will be believeable, please write more
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The real me" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I love your story please update asap.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment