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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ShyBob
Review:
I'm always amazed when someone pulls off a huge multi-cross that doesn't suck. I think it's because you remained focused on your core characters, and didn't try and have everyone be a heavy hitter. Some of the crossovers were just throw-away lines, but actually added even more depth to your 'verse without you having to delve into it. Really neat trick. Oh, yeah, I really enjoyed the story.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [26 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Letomo
Review:
Just wanted to say, I really enjoyed this story. Bit of a mish-mash of story-universes, but enjoyable. You got the characters right, they seemed to grow, it was time well spent. I hope there is more to come!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Elleria
Review:
Love this. Would really like to see more in this series. Please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Kovac
Review:
Well, people that didn't read this serie don't know what they're missing.

I often use the word "amazing" when I give some feedback to a good story but it seldomly is as deserved. Succeed in getting so many characters like Xander, Angel, Spike, Bruce Wayne, Alfred, Rogue, the Winchesters -to name the most involved- tangled in a Gotham-City story that makes you feel as if you're there with them and makes it look so natural and easy.

It feels like watching an actual episode of a TV show with top notch dialogues.

This one with Cordelia and Dean cracked me up!

"Dean shook his head as he watched Xander leave. “He’s insane, you realise.”

“He has been living surrounded by teenage girls for the last five years. That much punishment is bound to drive him a little nutty. Not that he was the picture of mental health to begin with.”

“Surrounded by hot super-powered women? Doesn’t sound like punishment to me.”

“Most of them are jailbait.”

“THAT sounds like punishment.”

So many others like this one. Too bad I can't quote them all.. It really reads like a fine novel.


I love the way Cordelia got/bribed/blackmailed all these different, independent people about 'working' for OSI. Who can resist a good salary, health care and dental, right? *G* She's so the type of practical, grounded, person that would think about something like this.


From now on, for me, Cordelia's "on another path" and it means she's living in Gotham City. It would make a kick-ass spin-off, BTW.*G*

Thanks again for the great read.
Review By [Kovac] • Date [27 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from fran
Review:
update
Review By [fran] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Interesting job you’ve got here.

The reunion between Angel and Cordelia works out very well, neatly tackling all of their essential issues after what happened since the last time they saw each other while making it clear that things will never be completely back to the way they were before.

And as for the case of the fire-demon...

A very dramatic bit of work, I have to admit (Particularly the idea about its connection to the League of Shadows and Angel’s own prior contact with the League).

In the end, though, you could stand to use a few less crossover character; I recognised a few faces- Rogue, Tony Stark, and the Charmed Ones are obvious examples-, but when so many of those characters never rate more than a brief reference in the story overall it starts to feel like you’re just showing off how many genres you know rather than actually including them for a definite PURPOSE...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from GundumM
Review:
it was all right
Review By [GundumM] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Nessling
Review:
This is an absolutely stunning story! I hope you plan on continuing it. I hope you plan on finishing the Cordelia/Bruce Wayne fic in the series that is unfinished.

I'm curious though, do you have a list of all of the crossover characters you've used in these fics? I recognized a lot of them, but a few of the names gave me the feeling that they were crossovers from another fandom, but I didn't recognize them.

Great, great story.
Review By [Nessling] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from SAS
Review:
This was a great story, I would love to see more of this series. Great work
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yes, I do have more, but it may take a while... Writing is a slow process for me.
Review By [SAS] • Date [17 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Aftermath" from SAS
Review:
Love this story. Great work
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [SAS] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Aftermath" from Nebularific
Review:
I really love this fic and I always get excited when I see new chapters.
Review By [Nebularific] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Aftermath" from Nebularific
Review:
I really love this fic and I always get excited when I see new chapters.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. We're almost at the end only one more chapter to go...
Review By [Nebularific] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Aftermath" from Greywizard
Review:
LOVED IT!!! ;-)

And Cordy's evaluation of Bruce and Angel as being a lot alike was a riot! ;-)
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're still enjoying it. Yeah, in some ways Bruce and Angel are so much alike. :)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: Adjusticar" from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
I'm not usually a Batman fan, but I was drawn to this one as it had my favourite girl centre-stage. Great work so far - and it might have the side effect of pushing me towards more Batman fics, too.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying this.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: Adjusticar" from ghostwhowalks
Review:
I have not been writing reviews at all for quite some time, Real World Stuff getting me down and getting in the way I guess. Still, shame on me. I loved the first story, and I find this one just as well done. Thank you and please keep up the good work.

Ghost who Walks (Bob)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad that you are enjoying this.
Review By [ghostwhowalks] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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