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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BigDubWins
Any chance that there'll be a callback to this in a future fic?
Comments from author:
Unlikely. It was intended to just be a one-shot.
Review By [BigDubWins] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)ridert
Nice, that graveyard scene always bothered me a bit it seemed a tad dark and bleak for the overall feel of the show at the time.
I really like how you changed it just enough to give Clark/Kal a little hope.
As for who the unknown woman is the only one I can think of is a real princess, a hero in her own right, and one of only a small number of his potential future friends/asociates who could maybe understand his pain.
Again nice story very well done.
Comments from author:
Yes spot on. It is a certain immortal Amazon Princess; one of the few people he will know that understand what he is facing. I also agree that the whole thing was a tad bleak to confront the 14 or 15 year old Clark with the knowledge that he is essentially immortal and that he will have to watch everyone he loves grow old and die. It is why i wrote this really. To give him some hope.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [27 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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