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Review of chapter "Battle Mode" from Harry
Review:
Some friendly advice Giles: DO NOT piss off Logan! Messing with him is bad enough. Getting WIllow upset and with her training with Logan is enough to mean SERIOUS TROUBLE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5" from firedrakegirl
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I love this story!! You should write a sequel with them at the school, and Spike helping teach. Or the Scoobies visiting! Love it!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [7 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5" from firedrakegirl
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This is an amazing story, and series! I love it!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5" from Dragonelf
Review:
Nice little story.

::Starts reading the sequel::

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You cannot step into
the same river twice.
- Heraclitus
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 5" from Jess
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Love it sweetheart!
Review By [Jess] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Battle Mode" from Anonymous Reviewer
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You need to work on spelling and tenses.

Willow being such a meanie to people she cares about is way out of character. She has had time to deal with her mutantness, and obviously her Sunnydale friends aren't freaking out on her, so her mood swings and general not niceness - i.e. threats to rip certain people's throats out for caring about her - seems to detract from the story of Willow the mutant.

Ditto on the previous story about the spelling and grammer. Though, I think in that case, she would be more abled and prepared in her planning. As research girl with a portable computer, she should have been able to figure out a way to contact other mutants if that's what she wanted. Plus, what about her family? I mean, sure we've heard that they don't hang around Sunnyhell alot, but they still exist and care.

Thanks for writing though. Keep at it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Mar 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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