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Review of chapter "Who's been sleeping in my bed?" from BrinLondofive
Review:
Glad to see that you're continuing this!
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [18 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who's been sleeping in my bed?" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Angel was a dead body. Egyhon can possess the sleeping or the dead(or those who allow themselves to be with whatever ritual Giles and co used). So you need to clarify Buffy was flat unconscious rather than just the dazed you suggest with the story.
Comments from author:
Just like it only takes a moment for fall asleep at the wheel of a moving car, it only takes a second of uncosciousness for Eyghon to possess someone. That's what happened during one of her blackouts.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [17 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eyghon" from Balder
Review:
I'm glad you're back writing this. Thank you for the new chapter!
Review By [Balder] • Date [5 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Complications" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
Really enjoying the story, I had read the first couple of chapters quite a while ago, but I don't think I'd gotten to the parts with Dru and Angel. And I just know that somewhere, Tara gave a sigh of relief that Warren met his end like that *GRIN*

Red
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Complications" from Fyrecat
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I am quite enjoying this story so far. I like how you are taking cannon events and scanging thw they influence the story based on the changes in this universe.
Great job so far. Keep it up!
Review By [Fyrecat] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Complications" from DrDamage
Review:
rowr! [VBG]
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Complications" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
I feel some kind of massive setup in the works, and I like it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from LostDragon
Review:
Any chance of this one being updated?
Comments from author:
The muse for this story is not talking to me at this time and I am waiting for inspiration to strike. I will try to get something soon but I have about a dozen other stories that need updating as well.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [18 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Ha! Dumbass Ford - good on you, Angel!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday Morning" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Uh oh.....
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from grd
Review:
Now that is the best thing to happen to Ford. Gnarl I believe was the skin eater, right?
Comments from author:
Yes. Yes he was.
Review By [grd] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from Gideon
Review:
Nice work by Angel to neutralize Ford, but I'm sure some other problem will crop up to occupy Buffy's time. And we can see where the scoobies learned not to ask for help with Giles trying to solve his problem alone, meaning that no progress is being made on the other problems either!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from BotticellisMuse
Review:
What cordelia said is haunting and you said portrayed the thought elouently with just a couple of sentences. It really sucked that she got a very raw deal here. I completely agree about joyce's opinion. It will be good i think, if buffy ends up with xander. Both cordelia and willow are selfserving to the hilt. Esp the redheads request for making love this time when they are completely aware and themselves. She has already known how xander feels about buffy and that she has been his bestfriend for a long time. For her to ask xander that is i think shamelessly selfish. Even during the series, ive really wondered and suspected abt willows motivation to encourage buffys interest towards angelus. She has vested interest--neutralizing the enemy and staking her claim all in one shot. Despite the fact that jessie her childhood bestfriend was killed and turned. Then the very contrary nature of the slayer and the vampire. Not to mention the leashed danger that lurks beneath the cursed soul, whether they realised it was permanent or not, theres no way for the slayer and the vampire to end up together. Ha! Ive always lamented the way joss et al milks this starcrossed lovers issue to the last drop. And ive never been sold in the idea. And even in the comics buffy got screwed over. When she has realized and ready to make a play for xander, dawn entered the picture. The hero really cant get a break! I do hope that in your story she'll get her chance for that.
Review By [BotticellisMuse] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ford" from BotticellisMuse
Review:
What cordelia said is haunting and you said portrayed the thought elouently with just a couple of sentences. It really sucked that she got a very raw deal here. I completely agree about joyce's opinion. It will be good i think, if buffy ends up with xander. Both cordelia and willow are selfserving to the hilt. Esp the redheads request for making love this time when they are completely aware and themselves. She has already known how xander feels about buffy and that she has been his bestfriend for a long time. For her to ask xander that is i think shamelessly selfish. Even during the series, ive really wondered and suspected abt willows motivation to encourage buffys interest towards angelus. She has vested interest--neutralizing the enemy and staking her claim all in one shot. Despite the fact that jessie her childhood bestfriend was killed and turned. Then the very contrary nature of the slayer and the vampire. Not to mention the leashed danger that lurks beneath the cursed soul, whether they realised it was permanent or not, theres no way for the slayer and the vampire to end up together. Ha! Ive always lamented the way joss et al milks this starcrossed lovers issue to the last drop. And ive never been sold in the idea. And even in the comics buffy got screwed over. When she has realized and ready to make a play for xander, here comes dawn. The hero really cant get a break! I do hope that in your story she'll get her chance for that.
Review By [BotticellisMuse] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ford" from DrDamage
Review:
In the next to last section of your story, you switch from past tense to present. It's a little jarring (and easy to do, as I know from my own efforts at storytelling)
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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