Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Family Issues

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Ford" from LostDragon
Review:
Any chance of this one being updated?
Comments from author:
The muse for this story is not talking to me at this time and I am waiting for inspiration to strike. I will try to get something soon but I have about a dozen other stories that need updating as well.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [18 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Ha! Dumbass Ford - good on you, Angel!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday Morning" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Uh oh.....
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from grd
Review:
Now that is the best thing to happen to Ford. Gnarl I believe was the skin eater, right?
Comments from author:
Yes. Yes he was.
Review By [grd] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from Gideon
Review:
Nice work by Angel to neutralize Ford, but I'm sure some other problem will crop up to occupy Buffy's time. And we can see where the scoobies learned not to ask for help with Giles trying to solve his problem alone, meaning that no progress is being made on the other problems either!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from mscecilyunderwood
Review:
What cordelia said is haunting and you said portrayed the thought elouently with just a couple of sentences. It really sucked that she got a very raw deal here. I completely agree about joyce's opinion. It will be good i think, if buffy ends up with xander. Both cordelia and willow are selfserving to the hilt. Esp the redheads request for making love this time when they are completely aware and themselves. She has already known how xander feels about buffy and that she has been his bestfriend for a long time. For her to ask xander that is i think shamelessly selfish. Even during the series, ive really wondered and suspected abt willows motivation to encourage buffys interest towards angelus. She has vested interest--neutralizing the enemy and staking her claim all in one shot. Despite the fact that jessie her childhood bestfriend was killed and turned. Then the very contrary nature of the slayer and the vampire. Not to mention the leashed danger that lurks beneath the cursed soul, whether they realised it was permanent or not, theres no way for the slayer and the vampire to end up together. Ha! Ive always lamented the way joss et al milks this starcrossed lovers issue to the last drop. And ive never been sold in the idea. And even in the comics buffy got screwed over. When she has realized and ready to make a play for xander, dawn entered the picture. The hero really cant get a break! I do hope that in your story she'll get her chance for that.
Review By [mscecilyunderwood] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ford" from mscecilyunderwood
Review:
What cordelia said is haunting and you said portrayed the thought elouently with just a couple of sentences. It really sucked that she got a very raw deal here. I completely agree about joyce's opinion. It will be good i think, if buffy ends up with xander. Both cordelia and willow are selfserving to the hilt. Esp the redheads request for making love this time when they are completely aware and themselves. She has already known how xander feels about buffy and that she has been his bestfriend for a long time. For her to ask xander that is i think shamelessly selfish. Even during the series, ive really wondered and suspected abt willows motivation to encourage buffys interest towards angelus. She has vested interest--neutralizing the enemy and staking her claim all in one shot. Despite the fact that jessie her childhood bestfriend was killed and turned. Then the very contrary nature of the slayer and the vampire. Not to mention the leashed danger that lurks beneath the cursed soul, whether they realised it was permanent or not, theres no way for the slayer and the vampire to end up together. Ha! Ive always lamented the way joss et al milks this starcrossed lovers issue to the last drop. And ive never been sold in the idea. And even in the comics buffy got screwed over. When she has realized and ready to make a play for xander, here comes dawn. The hero really cant get a break! I do hope that in your story she'll get her chance for that.
Review By [mscecilyunderwood] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ford" from DrDamage
Review:
In the next to last section of your story, you switch from past tense to present. It's a little jarring (and easy to do, as I know from my own efforts at storytelling)
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ford" from HMaxMarius
Review:
LOL! Now that's an angle I'd never considered for the Ford situation... =D

btw, you shift from past tense to present tense about halfway through. Unfortunately, present tense doesn't really work well in third person mode and was a bit of a distraction to the actual story.
Comments from author:
I'll check it over. I do try to keep a watch out for that.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comes in threes" from Genuka
Review:
Oh no! The Stupid 18th birthday thing. I can't spell or pronounce it..*scowl*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comes in threes" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Why am I hearing the Jaws Soundtrack in the background while I read this?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Comes in threes" from Gideon
Review:
That was pretty much a best case super understanding mother - daughter conversation there. I can sympathise with Joyce about putting her own daughter first but I can't see Xander looking forward to that conversation! It might give him another chance to practice his persuasive ability with women though :) Not like that! I meant so Joyce doesn't kill him... not that that seems likely from her thoughts so far.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Comes in threes" from Valandar
Review:
Ah... so Ford enters the picture. Now THIS will be awkward...
Review By [Valandar] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday" from borgrabbit
Review:
Not a clue to who IPL is. HP Lovecraft's sister? Maybe she stole Cthulu's pet?
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [20 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunday" from Gideon
Review:
I don't know what IPL could stand for either but it sounds important! I don't have any comment on Giles' phone call because you didn't tell us who it was from :(
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Page: 1 of 5 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking