Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from InDrk
Review:
Amazing, very, very well done. Your OCs are handled very well, I freakin' LOVE Coyle, especially with the shout out to Fallout 2, he really is a descendant of Cassidy and Cass', what, uncle, cousin? You also capture the Capitol Wasteland perfectly. I really hope you come back to this story soon, it really is brilliant.
Review By [InDrk] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
And it continues to be excellent, In thanks for this and all your other fantastic pieces of fiction I give you the 'short' 40 minutes 29 seconds "I am the doctor" medley I found on youtube in thanks for all the good fanfic you've churned out - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7sN2ijzhdk
Comments from author:
Thanks :-)
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Man, it's been a while since your last update, but your chapters are well worth the wait. I love how you can take separate and isolated details, and make one hell of a story from them.
I especially like your history of Gauss weapons. Though, if the one shot is a chinese gun, why is that the model used in the Operation Anchorage simulation by the American troops? Also, what's your explanation for the single-shot gauss in NV that eats 5 MF cells a shot?
I'd love to see some Old World Blues and Lonesome Road references. The Divide was a NCR trade route, and I'm sure someone has disappeared near Big MT.
Comments from author:
We see the Gauss Rifle on a Chinese propaganda poster. It's possible that the US was using captured ones because they were so effective.
You'll see more New Vegas and DLC references as the story progresses.
Thanks for the review :-)
Review By [ovid] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
An awesome piece, I hope to see a new update soon. I quite enjoy the "time off" as it were and am hopeful to see amusing moments in the cross training of the girls and anything else that you come up with.
Comments from author:
Well that was quite "soon" methinks :-p
Review By [Godogma] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]