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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from InDrk
Review:
Amazing, very, very well done. Your OCs are handled very well, I freakin' LOVE Coyle, especially with the shout out to Fallout 2, he really is a descendant of Cassidy and Cass', what, uncle, cousin? You also capture the Capitol Wasteland perfectly. I really hope you come back to this story soon, it really is brilliant.
Review By [InDrk] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Nice to see you back in the saddle as it were, now in thanks ~ www.youtube.com/watch?v=MxaazYPjjd4
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [8 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from janusi
Review:
It's great to see an update from you again.
Review By [janusi] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from Godogma
Review:
24 was excellent as well. Here's to rereading it now that I've read the new material. I'll just bet the 80's have another name for Coyle too... XD
Review By [Godogma] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just finished reareading the story and I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Imperial Cheese Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Comments from author:
Reasonably soon I guess ;-)
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Godogma
Review:
Still just as awesome as the first time. Here's hoping to see more of this excellent fic soon.
Comments from author:
Chapter XXIV posted... finally :-/
Review By [Godogma] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from horgoz
Review:
great story, will follow this one, even if i hope you will soon update XSGCOM or Compelled.

must say that i really like this even though have haven't played any of the fallout games very much.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear you think it's a good story even as a non Fallout Fan :-)
Review By [horgoz] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Lovely to see an update :) - and so mean too: Poor Coyle lol
Comments from author:
He deserves it :-p
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
And it continues to be excellent, In thanks for this and all your other fantastic pieces of fiction I give you the 'short' 40 minutes 29 seconds "I am the doctor" medley I found on youtube in thanks for all the good fanfic you've churned out - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7sN2ijzhdk
Comments from author:
Thanks :-)
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from AbscondingCascade
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Is it bad that my Folded, Spindled And Mutilated sense of humor rates that as only slightly worse than my jokes but not as bad as my dads? :)

Anyway, in thanks for this -http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ES7Y3_Uw3nk
Comments from author:
Yes, that's bad :-p
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice! Radioactive weapons, slavers supplying ex-slaves with guns... Great weaving of plans :D

As usual, awesome tour of the wastelands :)

Good to see Coyle's sense of history and culture being useful - as well as his sufficiently advanced skills ;)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
And now I feel sorry for the slavers with Coyle deciding to make them a target lol

Glad to see an update - seems to have been a long time since the last one! (hint hint)

Great writing as always - looking forward to the next instalment :)
Comments from author:
Somewhat shorter wait between chapters this time ;-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [3 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from ovid
Review:
Man, it's been a while since your last update, but your chapters are well worth the wait. I love how you can take separate and isolated details, and make one hell of a story from them.

I especially like your history of Gauss weapons. Though, if the one shot is a chinese gun, why is that the model used in the Operation Anchorage simulation by the American troops? Also, what's your explanation for the single-shot gauss in NV that eats 5 MF cells a shot?

I'd love to see some Old World Blues and Lonesome Road references. The Divide was a NCR trade route, and I'm sure someone has disappeared near Big MT.
Comments from author:
We see the Gauss Rifle on a Chinese propaganda poster. It's possible that the US was using captured ones because they were so effective.

You'll see more New Vegas and DLC references as the story progresses.

Thanks for the review :-)
Review By [ovid] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from Godogma
Review:
An awesome piece, I hope to see a new update soon. I quite enjoy the "time off" as it were and am hopeful to see amusing moments in the cross training of the girls and anything else that you come up with.
Comments from author:
Well that was quite "soon" methinks :-p
Review By [Godogma] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from Loatroll
Review:
Great stuff like always! Thanks for the great read. Really looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review :-)
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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