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Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from squeegybug
Review:
They are totally just like Dean and Sam. I like Dawnie sometimes, but the way most people write her it's like, she's a whiny b*tch. I know she totally really was, but it's hard to read her that way. I liked her better when she was so lonely and wanted so badly to be one of the Potentials, how she stepped up, when she thought that she was one. And when she found out that she really wasn't, she was totally like, well, I'll be a Watcher, I can rock the research... And she and Xander were bonding over being the only 'normal' ones. (Even though she was completely not even human like a few short years back, and could wreck the entire universe because she was a being of pure energy)...And when she was bonding with Spike over stuff. I think I like grown-up Dawnie better than whiny teenager Dawnie.
Review By [squeegybug] • Date [6 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from WomanofLetters
Review:
Fun to see Buffy and Dawn fight/make up via email. Nice parallels with Sam and Dean -- also a nice contrast. One pair can't live apart, the other can't live together. But they're trying. Better relationships through email, huh? :)

Thanks for the cute story.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from WomanofLetters
Review:
Really liked the way you described the division between Buffy and the Scoobies, with them all on either side of the line (or straddling it). Kind of sad that Willow and Giles would be that way; no, cookies certainly don't apologize for something as big as that. Your description of Xander understanding Buffy so well made me smile. "He knew all about living through violence nowadays, about fighting because someone had to. It wasn’t fun and games and midnight strolls in the cemetery anymore."

You have a way of writing Dean and Buffy where Dean doesn't come off with his usual, macho bravado, where it's just two soldiers on the line who understand each other on a very basic level. That really resonates with me.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from breve
Review:
I never liked Kennedy. Good riddance.

Favourite line. Ever.
Review By [breve] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from Javian
Review:
Fun!

Although the numbers killed me a little bit. Just a bit.
Edit in reply: The 2's and 4's instead of too's and for's in the Buffy-Dawn emails. It's just me and old fogey peeves. Carry on with your delightful characterizations. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you.

But, numbers? What numbers?
Review By [Javian] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Liked the emails from the queen to dawnpatrol!!! Very heartwarming between two sisters!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
This was a really informative and entertaining one-shot. You managed to talk about the "split" between the Scoobies without making the others sound like heartless jerks/OOC. Selfish, sure, naive, sure, but that's totally IC (btw, I love Giles and Willow, so I'm allowed to talk about their bad personality traits, right? lol) Anyhow, I'm enjoying this series so far. The interaction between the characters is great. I'll be moving on to the third piece now :D
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from nightshadowlife
Review:
oh awesome chapter! I have to say that this series is the most bestest one ever! lol I totally mean it though, its actually my favorite series out there, and I'm a total douche for not reading and reviewing right away!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from clarityfades
Review:
I'm trying to catch up on a ton of updates but I just had to tell you...loved the dual bitchiness. I have sisters & try as you might to get along, we can't resist pushing each other's buttons @ least occasionally. Great balance of slow forgiveness & regrowth of a relationship. :D
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [15 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from (Past Donor)Mari
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Thank you for addressing the apology issue--no one ever really seemed to apologize to her, did they?
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from jax
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Each piece in this series is so different--adding layers-pov/tone/plot shifts. Really lovely, even just as a textual experiment. (Discarding the fact that I love these two fandoms, making it that much more epic ;-) ).
Review By [jax] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from ShyBob
Review:
I loved the first chapter, but it just doesn't mesh with the second. There's too much of a shift in tone or style for it to flow well. As a next story/insert? Great, works well. The first chapter is awesome enough to stand on its own.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

The way the second chapter isn't really anything at all is why I tagged it onto the first chapter. I wanted to say it, but it wasn't worth standing alone.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Yesterday's Dawn" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Fun and very true to both characters. I like that you didn't shy away from the fact that both Buffy and Dawn are hardheaded and tend towards bratty when they're hurt, but you did give us, the reader, the silver-lining that at least they *are* talking. This was a nice addition to this series and I eagerly await the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "~*~" from thekellylynn
Review:
Love this series. More please?
Review By [thekellylynn] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "~*~" from yakoba
Review:
very nice and depressing :) can't wait for the next part of the saga!
Review By [yakoba] • Date [5 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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