Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
LallaBelleReview:
Loved that last line. Be interesting to see another drabble of vampire!Dawn.
Also the city in which the Volturi reside is Volterra :D
Edit: Hee awesome.
And I know the feeling. I'm a pretty good speller myself and still manage to end up getting it all wrong... especially when writing with a pen.
Comments from author:
Sparklepire!Dawn would be an interesting subject for further writing, I agree. I'll have to keep that in mind. :)
Thank you for both the review and the Volterra catch. I really can spell, I promise.
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LallaBelle] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Not Rated