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Original of the Species Part 4: Cell

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Review of chapter "Appendix" from deterlanglytone
Review:
Okay really enjoyed this besides that one Buffy god modeing up the second level of Super but it did not subtract from the story. But when did 18th century Slayer/Watcher team Marcus and Victoria come from I don't remember being mentioned at all in this what chapter/story where they mentioned in
Comments from author:
I introduced Marcus and Victoria in part 2B, chapter 4, the Cruciamentum chapter. And in this story of course, chapter 22. I introduced them in the Cruciamentum chapter to add what I hoped was some interesting Slayer background history, make the Council look like even bigger dicks then they were and of course properly foreshadow them to be used again in this story as Xander's great-great-great-grand parents. Sometimes I make stuff as I go along and where the story takes me, and sometimes I do try to plan ahead. ;)
Review By [deterlanglytone] • Date [23 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from Dragonelf
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You have done an awesome job with this series.

When you started using the phrase Children of Grey and the name Na’toth I was for some reason reminded about the TV-series Babylon 5. Coincidence or not?

Anyway I hope you will get inspired to start writing part 5 in this series.


::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Cheese Pie::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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EDIT: If I find any good BtVS/B5 crossovers and I remembers it I will post a link to them.

EDIT 2: By the way, have you written any stories besides the ones you have posted here? If yes, where can they be found.
Comments from author:
One of my weakness' as a writer is that I'm not that good coming up with original names. So I occasionally like to steal from/pay hommage to some of my favorite shows. I'm a huge Babylon 5 fan and I was lucky to have met Richard Biggs and Andreas Katsulas before they died. While I suffered from a lot of writers block and real life distractions I am currently writing on part 4. And it will have a cross over with another sci-fi universe, although not B5. Which would be kinda hard since I already established that B5 exists in my verse as a show.

But we desperately need more B5/BtVS crossover. There is so precious little of it and as far as I can tell it's almost all abandoned works in progress. :( Which is why I never post anything unless it's finished or if I know for 100% that I will finish it. If you know any good B5/BtVS crossovers that were finished and aren't short stories drop me link, will ya?
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from buffyrazz
Review:
Yaaay does a mildly chi assisted Snoopy dance!

Wait! Goku didn't deliver the banquet? damn his abyss of a stomach!

Subdued Grover dance
Review By [buffyrazz] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from buffyrazz
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I'm sure the adage let sleeping Dragons and Saiyains applies but...

Poke... Poke...

Have begun re-reading from the start.. offers a buffet banquet to sate even Gokus gut if it means more is coming

Hope... Hope..
A Fan :)
Comments from author:
Well, I can't say when it will posted, but I can now say that I'm writing again after a very long hiatus. Just be patient! And send that banquet. ;)
Review By [buffyrazz] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from buffyrazz
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Update on my efforts to gain use of the Rosat..

Djinn get very very cranky if u nag them.. and bad things happen "whimper"

Oh n trying to reason with a pubescent Namekian.. notagreatidea.

Missing my Orig of Spec fix
Review By [buffyrazz] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from Dapsy
Review:
So many twists, realties, time periods, various versions of same people, and who know what else mixed up together into one.... amazingly understable.... story that makes sense. I am amazed you did not tie your mind into knots while writing this(or did you... hence the slight insanity? :D). Not only that, but also managed to put in a lot of emotion into the scenes while keeping characters true to their unique selves with their own unique flavours... so yeah, good stuff ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words, they make me twirl my mustache in glee. -_-
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from princeaj
Review:
been reading since the beginning ;and have to say you did a great job on this fic it's really thought out it shows in every scene and sentience. now is xander going to ever get past the pain and is he going to reach other levels of power.
Comments from author:
Wouldn't you like to know?

I've asked Kosh the reply Vorlon and he says: Understanding is a three-edged sword.
Review By [princeaj] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Appendix" from TheHeartist
Review:
Bangin' ending! Hooray for more Saiyans! Even bigger hooray for Belmo's sister showing up all Super Saiyan somehow! You did Androids #13-15 before...we getting Brolly too? Eegads, that'd be freaking perfect :P I'd quite like to write a spin-off short story to this, only a few chapters, concerning some of the soldiers in the days leading up to the Cell Games. I'll give you the complete concept soon and you give me the go ahead or not :) Good times, cannot wait for the next part, fic of the year! :D
Comments from author:
Alas, no Brolly. I'm only sticking to manga material and Brolly is 100% filler.

As for your idea of a spin-off, that's awesome! Just tell me what you have in mind
Review By [TheHeartist] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Sleeping in Light" from buffyrazz
Review:
Aaaaaanndd breathe...

Cell is toast, post Android World Buffy got to let go, Original of Species world got to help out with supplies etc AND you got in a WTH teaser for the next stage.. yup works 4 me.

Now comes the hard part 4 me... or if ur Frankenfurter.. the best.. Antic - i - pation!

And dammit.. no matter what i offer Po Po and Dende they won't let me sequester you n other authors in the ROSAT..

#justanidea

:)
Comments from author:
Just tell me when you manage to convince Popo and Dende to let us use the RoSaT. ;-)
Review By [buffyrazz] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Sleeping in Light" from janusi
Review:
Moving, and also quite infuriating by adding 2 more story threads that we won't get to hear more about for a good long while.

You won't leave us hanging for too long, will you?
Review By [janusi] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Sleeping in Light" from CageFire
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Awesome end to this story, I'll be looking forward to the next story in the series, as it looks to be quite a deviation from canon, keep up the excellent work.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue - Sleeping in Light" from superbrutal
Review:
I enjoyed a nice emotional chapter very much. It gives you character some nice depth.

Great Job, I can't wait to see what you have planned for the future.

:)
Comments from author:
Me too. ;)
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24 - Exit Music (For a Film)" from Hoyt
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Oh god...

That baby is Belmo's right?

The ending alone gets you a ten.

I've got to see what comes next!
Review By [Hoyt] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24 - Exit Music (For a Film)" from janusi
Review:
Seriously, you ended your story with a cliffhanger? It was great, but come on.
Comments from author:
Muhahahahahah!!!!!

And there's still more to come!
Review By [janusi] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24 - Exit Music (For a Film)" from CageFire
Review:
OK, awesome chapter, a new twist at the end, and I have no idea what's going on. I'm guessing this is going to be original, because I'm fairly positive nothing like this happened in either canon.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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