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Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from Selias
Review:
I like the idea of the spiders starting their own version of Xavier's school.
Review By [Selias] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* Lovely update!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30" from Valandar
Review:
Umm... several times in the opening section, you refer to 'invincible agents' instead of 'invisible agents', and 'x-gen' instead of 'x-gene'...
Comments from author:
tx for pointing that out...should be fixed now. (Hawklan)
Review By [Valandar] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Genuka
Review:
Such an evil Willow taunt *glares enviously* More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Hope's spider-sense lets her beat the alarm clock? That is so *cute*!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very good chapter, I love it!

Ms. Parker and Giles what a great matchup!
All superhero groups need web sites to tell about themselves, with marketing! What a great idea!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from tactless
Review:
I really enjoy this story. I wish you grammar was better though. I understand that English isn't you primary language, but it gets distracting on occasion.
Comments from author:
I understand. to my defense i am dyslectic and this is A OLD story.
English lessons in class where during my time in school not THAT important we all had english but not as many hours as today children have.
Most of my reading and writing i have to learn by my self reading and writing.

and FRACK english can be difficult.
Review By [tactless] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 27" from Bobboky
Review:
very very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 27" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
And here I thought Norman naming her April in the Spider-Girl canon was bad (talk about reinforcement; April comes before May...)

If you were wondering why Wasp is such a nightmarish handle for a Spidey-foe, please remember that there is a species of wasp that stings spiders to paralyse them and implant their fertilised eggs into. The larva hatch and eat the spider alive from the inside.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [23 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 27" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter, glad to see that Xander rescued Wasp, she is really an innocent in all of this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from Dragonelf
Review:
Very nice chapter.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Carrot Cheese Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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