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Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from JinaSolo
Review:
Very interesting story...

More please!
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1. Prologue

nice prologue which ensures the reader (aka me in this instance) wants to read more *g*

2. Chapter One: Alpha and Omega

ahh nice again and Spike and that demon girl with the I whatever are here as well.
Hope to read more of this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from Blackguard
Review:
This is a pretty awesome story so far, please don't tell me this was abandoned.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from Cmiller
Review:
That was interesting and I hope you add more soon. BTW are you going to have Faith in this as well? you know outside the prologue.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from Dusel
Review:
Hmmm...you got it one actually, my Sheppard is a Paragon, with a gun mind you. Making Xander a biotic is all and nice, making him an Adept maybe? Anyway I will be waiting for the next chapter where hopefully you'll explain how Xander is a biotic and Spike will get kicked around for laughs.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Dusel
Review:
Everyone is more powerful then Xander, everyone is a better fighter then Xander, everyone is smarter then Xander and even though he has lots of guts and courage, there are plenty of people who have even more of that then Xander, specially in the ME universe...Sorry I just can't find any good qualities in his character at all, there are some authors that describe him as the ultimate bad-ass when he still has nothing to back it up and yet everyone is groveling at his feet, what a farce. People just...tend to make it so out of the blue, very few try and build up that bad-ass image at all so I have to say that I am a bit biased towards Xander and Buffy of later seasons 4-5+ even though she is my favorite character, too much spunk and know it all when they are just some of the worst strategists ever.
Comments from author:
Sheperd is subjective. Because Sheperd is essentially, you. My Commander Sheperd is a ruthless bastard. Yours may be a Paragon of all that is good.

And like I've hinted at, Xander is a biotic. And he's gotten some upgrades that I won't begin to mention yet.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from Dusel
Review:
What I'm thinking...I'm thinking that Aria will blow both Xander's and Spike's heads if they start to snip at each other over some trivial shit and that I like Sheppard better then Xander...nice story by the way, has great potential.
Comments from author:
Aria is incredibly prudent, Mass Effect 2 shows this quite well. It wouldn't serve her greater purpose to kill either Spike or Xander. And who says Aria is more powerful than Xander eh? :P
Review By [Dusel] • Date [8 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very entertaining and interesting start.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from FireFlyFan
Review:
I like it. Should be interesting to see where it goes and if they join up with the Normandy crew.

FFF

Updated:Pretty bleak future for Xander then...
Comments from author:
Okay, I'll make this clear now, in case you're waiting for something and it doesn't happen...remember what happened to Garrus' team? Not going to change :P
Review By [FireFlyFan] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from SnakeFox
Review:
I always thought a Buffy/Mass Effect crossover would be interesting. Can't wait to see what you do with this ^_^
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from PunkCanuck
Review:
Interesting so far.

It also sounds like Fred survived Illyria, Yay!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm hoping to do a Smegol/Gollum type relationship between the two of them, although less self destructive.
Review By [PunkCanuck] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Alpha and Omega" from Bluesnowman
Review:
pretty good.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Robby
Review:
Great start for a story!!!! Can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out. Keep up the awesome work!
Review By [Robby] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Vhen
Review:
Well. I am interested. I am currently playing Mass Effect 2 so I am really interested.
Review By [Vhen] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from rotingCORPSE
Review:
will xander see the resemblance of shepard's team with his scooby gang?

joker = oz but with his personality

jack = faith obviously

tali = willow with the tech and babble

and so on.
Comments from author:
The real question you should be asking is will Xander even see Sheperd's team at all? The timeline will become apparent soon enough...
Review By [rotingCORPSE] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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