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Review of chapter "1" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Interesting. Liked the movie but its been a long time.

I always enjoy post-Chosen fics where Dawn's allowed to be a badass ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End of ends" from Kaleidofox
Review:
I like alot, ALOT alot, but where is Buffy during all this?
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End of ends" from Thedruid
Review:
Ok much better. I think the only reason I'm not really following the plot is because I don't really watch Supernatural.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1" from PrincessTaffy
Review:
I really like your initial idea, and I love Dennis... It seems like you set him up for his own story in the first chapter, but then second chapter bam, you skipped on to Supernatural and made the whole thing focus on Dean. Not that the 2nd-4th chapters were bad, I love them, I just feel like it doesn't fit in with where it looked like you were going at first.
My suggestion would be to split it up into two different stories within the same series. That way you can give Dennis the attention he deserves (Such a cute psychic!) and then have a clean starting place for the Supernatural crossover in its own story next in the series.
Review By [PrincessTaffy] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh Death" from FaithWinchester
Review:
I would so love to see this story fleshed out, you know, epic and in detail!
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh Death" from Missingviolet
Review:
great stuff as usual! liking the sam/faith pairing very much.
especially darth sam! super awesome..
will come and review somemore next week.. currently in exam week!
i'm loving this lots.. promise to come back and review the previous ones once i'm free!
kudos!
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Recruiting Carter Edlund" from GypsyDruid
Review:
That's not REALLY the end, is it?
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Short, sweet, and logical. But that was a beautiful house. Sigh.
Comments from author:
I know right? I would almost want to move into the house, exorcise it first of course. thanks for reviewing!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1" from DigiSim
Review:
It's been a while since I saw the movie, so I have to ask. Was Dennis played by Matt Lilliard, who later played Shaggy in the first two live action Scooby-Doo movies?
Comments from author:
He was! I used to have a big thing for that dude, he was always so nerdily intense. lol.
Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [DigiSim] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1" from Thedruid
Review:
Huh. I really gotta stop looking at these storys with less than 5 thousand words. They just get to an interesting part, then cut off. Granted longer stories do as well, but at least there is a good chance they are still being written.

And so after that gripe, it was well written, with good charcter interation. Only problem is the same problem with 85% of short stories. You just set up the situation, then stop from actually creating a plot, history, or a charcter with any depth. The entire point of the story just to set up a punch line, or have some people meet, then do nothing. A real challenge for a writer isn't it (sarastic).
Comments from author:
Wow, on the one hand I do want to say thank you to the backhanded compliment, no matter how mean the comment turned out to be.

If you don't like the short stories, then stop reading them. I have other, longer ones where I'm obviously trying to set up a more complex situation. I do stuff like this to exercise my muse and keep her from hanging on the rafters.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Rating [3 out of 10]
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