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Review of chapter "Kvetha Fricai" from aveave
Review:
This is really good story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Review By [aveave] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kvetha Fricai" from Krysstinia
Review:
I've only read the first two books, so I'm assuming that this takes place in the third one?

I really like what you've done here, and am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Actually I've only read the first two as well so this is kinda my version of the third one :) Just with a few extra twists
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kvetha Fricai" from thegenuineimitation
Review:
Not bad but watch out for too much drama and not enough substance. Bold declarations are all well and fine occasionally in fact they're what draw most readers in, but be careful make sure there's enough meat for a meal. Still so far so good, I'm interested in seeing where you go with it.
Comments from author:
Ok thanks for the comment I'll try and keep that in mind :)
Review By [thegenuineimitation] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kvetha Fricai" from Millaros
Review:
It has a really good start, and i think that it is truely one of it's kind.

Do continue this story!
Comments from author:
Thanks :) I'm trying!
Review By [Millaros] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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