Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Aww, Connor has a sister... and dead parents - opps. Oh well, a change is as good as a rest and at least the wraith won't be targeting him specifically, at least not at first. From the first part of your story it looks like he did a good job in teaching his sister to protect herself so good on him.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]