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Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Awesome! Thank you for sharing the story. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from nFaele
Review:
I enjoyed this (the first one too), however one minor nitpick:

'Queu' in the line "And that, lady and gentleman, is my queue to get lost" should be 'cue'.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it and thanks pointing out that correction. I can't wait to tell my beta.
Review By [nFaele] • Date [6 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from MBB
Review:
A really hilarious series.
This chapter is not as brilliant as the first one, but then that one was hard to top.
Nevertheless, I feel that in the next chapter the Potter gang should get the upper hand.
Because once Hermione gets adapted to their way of thinking, her brain should be a scary weapon, shouldn't it?.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it! I've played around with a couple of plots for the next part of the series so I'm not quite sure where it will go. :)
Review By [MBB] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from lorwen
Review:
again, awesome...
would like to read more in this vein ;)
Comments from author:
Thanks again. :) I have some ideas for this universe that I hope will get written soon.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Sweet!
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [15 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This was a cute follow-up.

You should really create a series for this one and the previous one-- That way they are linked together so when you read the first one this one will pop up and the reader can automatically see it.

Good stuf, btw, for reasoning why Hermione would work with the Watcher's Council :)
Comments from author:
Thanks very much. I've been playing around with different scenes for this one but for the life of me, I can't figure out how to link two stories into a series once they've already been posted. I'll have to figure out something. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from silvergaurd
Review:
I'd love to see more.
Comments from author:
Well, I have some ideas but nothing on paper so far. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [14 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from dreameralways
Review:
A lovely continuance. I always wondered why they didn't get more creative in their problem solving in Harry Potter. Nicely written and quite humorous.
Comments from author:
Thanks very much!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
LOL Thats funny.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great fun read, thanks.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from twlight
Review:
This is excellent, I am trying to decide if this is better than the story before this one. ^_^
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Review By [twlight] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from Rob
Review:
LOL! As much as I like Hermione it's still fun to see Xander rile her up.

Rob
Comments from author:
Xander enjoyed it too. He likes to annoy. It's his gift.
Review By [Rob] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from mokahi
Review:
How fun! Your story is very amusing. Hope you are inspired to continue in this 'verse.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I have a few ideas but I think Hermione would injure me if I wrote anything more.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Maybe Not So Obvious" from Tjin
Review:
Very Funny... I LoL'ed...

-Tjin
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you laughed. :)
Review By [Tjin] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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