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Review of chapter "Second Knight" from TheKnightofFaerie
Review:
Oh gods, this made me laugh so hard I literally fell out of my chair. Jarad from Pretender as Batman. That's funny! Dear lord this is great. Keep writing, please! The world needs more works this good.
Review By [TheKnightofFaerie] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from draconis
Review:
The story status is marked as NOT complete.

The wording of the last sentence of item/chapter 2 however, suggests this is actually "complete".

You may wish to correct the status (or update as appropriate).
Review By [draconis] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
This was greatly awesome. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Please update!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [21 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from wraithrune
Review:
Cool!
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
As he rose into the sky, though, he could hear one of the figures mutter, “White people are really, really weird.”

*snicker*

Great chapter, loved how it's all coming together.

If Jarod owns enough stock in the Center through various means he can order them to leave him alone through a little financial blackmail.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from Ghostrider
Review:
*Evil Overlord Cackling*

THIS.IS.BRILLIANT!

You've captured Jarod and Co. brilliantly, the voices and actions are perfect! Been rewatching the show recently and truthfully, he only needs the cape. Miss Parker as Thalia is inspired.

I've had to read through it several times, just to recover from insane laughter, just to have it start up again at the next line. I pity (almost) Miss Parker. You KNOW Broots and Sydney are having the time of their life. The visuals of Syd telling Broots about Jarod's gift..... Broots will be on the floor, rolling with laughter, especially after finding out what Daddy Parker received.

Zoe as his 'Alfred' is just perfect. A motherly type that brooks no backtalk and puts him in his place. And crossing it with Demolition Man and Predator two? *More insance E.O.C*

Please, please, write more in this verse.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Needs to work on his intimidation skills a bit.
Comments from author:
True, but as it was once said, even Chuck Norris was once a mere mook. Jarod has a long way to go.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from Tjin
Review:
ooh god... that's funny, i don't care who you are...
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from darthridian
Review:
hehe great addition mate, looking forward to some more and really enjoyed Ms. Parker getting the Talia outfit, which other than calling Jarod beloved is kinda fitting as her family has been after him for a long time too.

keep up the great writing mate.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It was something of a lark that we threw in as we were torn between Catwoman and Talia.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from Gulanticus
Review:
I remember when I first reviewed this story. I was so glad to read a Pretender/Batman story. I can't wait to read more
Review By [Gulanticus] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from RubyPaladin
Review:
This is rather good and I can't wait for another chapter.
Comments from author:
When the author sends another idea my way, I'll see about it.
Review By [RubyPaladin] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Knight" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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