I saw this story posted, went back to read the first one, and just finished this chapter. I think you have an interesting story going on and I would definitely like to see where things go- I'm a suck for Snape/Willow and Lucius/Willow sounds interesting.

Only thing- I really think you should combine these stories. Because your first one didn't really feel like it had an ending and this chapter obviously continues immediately.

Good job and good luck with churning out more Willow fun :)

good start. can't wait to read more :D