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Review of chapter "VI" from DieselDriver
Review:
Reading this again is just as good as the first time. This is a really fun story and I like the characterizations. Well Done!
Comments from author:
Many thanks - hope to add another story to the series soon.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RogueAngel
Review:
hello! i'm back again. Just finished re-reading this series, and had a couple of point/questions i need to sort out. At first I didn't know what to think of your idea that Kryptonians were seed by early humans by an alien race. But then i realised yeah that fits in well with the stargate crossover you have in here. The Ancients placed them (but that would be further out than any other world for this) and they diverted from humanity like the Wraith. But instead of become life-sucking-spider-creatures, they became human looking solar batteries. But then there's the stargate/buffy in the same world thought. For the stargate people the ancient gods were aliens ensaving earth. But in buffy the ancient goods are real (ethans dealing with Janus, Willow with Orisis etc) which would help work in a Wonder Woman story line (Hint hint). anyway don't mind me just thinking some things through.
thanks again for the story.
p.s you said not Barry flash? please please please not Jay. Wally would be better. Or even bart
Comments from author:
I don't think it will be any of the traditional Flashes - I'd really prefer not to say more about that, ditto about the Green lantern, until I'm sure that the story will work. Part of that will have to be a plot that actually justifies having all these superheroes around - at the moment they're doing rescue work, crime fighting, etc. mostly off camera, but nothing that couldn't be done by regular police etc.

Re Wonder Woman - I've already got Superman, Supergirl, and Hancock, without some decent opposition there really isn't a lot of point adding another brawler - even then, there needs to be something for her to do. And even with magic I suspect that it would be pretty hard to hide an island from modern technology. I really doubt it will happen, except possibly as a VERY non-traditional version of the character.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, really nice fic here. I never really got to finish this when it first came out, and when I suddenly remembered this sic, well.... I just had to reread and finish it. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
I hope to write more sequels in the future, but it won't be soon.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
An excellent story and en excellent start to the series. Thanks for conceiving, and writing it.
Comments from author:
If you like this I'd suggest checking out The Big Apricot (address at the end of the story) where there is a lot more Superman fanfic.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [3 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Gideon
Review:
Great story. A worthy opponent for superpowered beings, one of their own creations! I love how you worked it so they needed help from mere humans in the final resolution :) I didn't like how you had Supergirl lie to the AI but I guess that just shows her 'humanity'. I wonder if Superman could have done that?
The multiple crossover were fun too.
Comments from author:
I think that Supergirl regards the AI as a faulty machine, not a person - remember that she knows more about that technology than anyone else, even Superman - and thinks that the stakes are too high to take any chances.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from thesithspawn
Review:
Very nice, a few more interactions and fleshed out characters with maybe a love connection for Kara would have been nicer but you can't have everything in one fic.

Good work, is there a sequel coming?
Comments from author:
There are several sequels, but they're much shorter - follow the links to the series Supergirl Returns.
Review By [thesithspawn] • Date [14 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from valdimarian
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Damn, you put me in a hard choice! The Return or XSGCOM by Hotpoint for best non Buffy cross... Both are good stories, but in different ways, so it's quite hard to judge one against the other!

Ah, well, so long as the vote comes down to the two of you I'm guaranteed that one of my favored will win :D
Comments from author:
Actually my money's on another story entirely in that category - I hope I'm wrong, but I suspect something else is going to win.
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from disheffler
Review:
I don't think it is wise to just release Kryptonian tech. It would be safer to teach the sciences and let people figure out how to apply it themselves with maybe some helpful hints in the world of engineering and such.
Comments from author:
Why did you think they destroyed the Fortress? They've leveled the playing field, nobody gets an unfair advantage, and Clark and Kara can set the pace in publishing text books etc. - they've both got perfect memories and Kryptonian educations so that shouldn't be a problem.
Review By [disheffler] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIV" from disheffler
Review:
there is one flaw here which is simply that the switch shouldn't have worked because he has already done Clarks DNA so Jor-El would have known that Ziva's wasn't Kara's based on the lack of famial markers.
Comments from author:
At this point Jor-El isn't even attempting a genuine analysis - he's faking the results.
Review By [disheffler] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ShyBob
Review:
I've been Kaiser Soze'd! I figured Batman had gone evil and the Navy was going to nuke him 0_o Nice job with the crossovers and the successful reintroduction of Supergirl.
Comments from author:
I did consider it, but Evil!Jor-El seemed a more credible foe.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Arekanderu
Review:
A great story :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Past Donor)DonSample
Review:
I liked this story a lot, but I still say that if Superman ever wants to blow something up, he doesn't have to borrow a nuke from anyone. He just has to drop a rock on it, travelling at a few hundred thousand kilometers a second.
Comments from author:
Kryptonian materials are TOUGH - maybe that just scatters crystalline dust through the atmosphere, with thousands of New Kryptons springing up around the world. A nuke fries their internal structure before they disperse.

Plus I wanted to write a scene where Ziva gets to set off a nuke. What's not to like?
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice job. Any idea what you'll work on next?

-Would that include "Trouble Brewing" and "Wolfbane"?
Comments from author:
I need to get back to work on my games writing, which actually helps to pay the bills, but I'll still be writing some fanfic as time permits, probably finishing off some of the unfinished stories.

- probably
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Thedruid
Review:
I haven't reviewed this story much, but it's a good one. Reminds me of exactly why I like good CSI crossovers, any CSI.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What a fun conclusion!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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