all plans of starting work early are ruined. all plans of starting work on time are ruined. reading this story is worth it you have a great imagination. thank goodness for smart phones i can continue reading during lunch.
I can't remember if I gave a review before. And as I've had little memories problems.... I prefer giving one more than not any ^^
I read your story using the 'whole story' option, so I didn't realize I finished reading everything without giving each chapter its review. Then I finished and I was just wowed by how great your plot to give second chances like that was.
Each child is an amazing character. And the choices of parents seemed perfect. Rodney marked me by the fact I could see him being the greatest father for Willow. They are the perfect father daughter fit ^^
My favorite has always been Xander in any and all stories. Seeing a little him made me happy. But your plot bunnies attacked me while reading about him.... I share with you because I know I won't be writing this idea, or not for many years to come ^^ I have too much going on in fanfiction on another site (and in french... not so good yet with writing in English) and in my life.
The idea was of Teal'c going to train the Jaffa's alliance and help Bratac and Ryack with something on a different planet. Then suddenly, while spying some enemies taking down an entire town, he feels something pulling on his pants and looking down he sees this little one year old white boy with big brown eyes. The kid look at him with innocent (mischievous eyes) and hug the Teal'c leg before saying 'daddy'. And the rest will be history in the making as the child adopt Teal'c as his father and Teal'c has to chance how he lives and where he lives to take care of his new son. I was thinking all the Jaffa's would have fun seeing the two interacting together. And Ryack would make a great big brother. And Bratac a perfect grandfather. ^^ there isn't any story out there with Teal'c going with the Jaffas and living with them instead of staying with SGC, so I thought it would be good for Teal'c to be the Jaffa's alliance new chief and to stay with them and have his little Xander growing up there ^^
Sorry about the bunny, but I hope it jump on you so it will let me alone............... (slight evil look turning innocent when you look in my direction).
With much much love as it's your fault a bunny bit me like that.
Review By [calileane] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This chapter is so very sad. I feel so depressed every time I read this chapter. Your words can easily draw forth the emotions of the readers. It's pure genius. I also really love how you made the mysterious PTB into the caring Greek gods. That was a very unique and creative interpretation of who the Powers really were. The personalities and attitudes were excellent matches to their respective deities.
Review By [fyretyger] • Date [24 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
