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Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing start, I'd love to read more and find out how Xander managed to get sent there.
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. Not sure when I'll update. I don't have much time to write these days.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from MaxPayne
Review:
Nice beginning...can we get another chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm not sure when the next chapter will be ready, but I am working on it.
Review By [MaxPayne] • Date [2 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Cuautla
Review:
I have not played the game but I am intrigued by the idea. Definately want to read more. I may use this idea as the basis of my first fic. Bunnies, just perfect.
Comments from author:
Glad it peaked your interest. I'm not sure when I'll get around to working on it more, but feel free to use the idea yourself. I wouldn't mind reading where someone else would take the same premise.
Review By [Cuautla] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from rinv
Review:
When are you going to update this fic?
Comments from author:
I'm not sure when I'll get around to it since there are other fics I want to update more, but there is more coming.
Review By [rinv] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from atticus
Review:
Having recently finished Arkham, myself, I would like to see more of this while details remain fresh in my mind. A chapter 2 would be nice.
Comments from author:
Great game huh. I'm not sure when I'll get around to it since there are other fics I want to update more, but there is more coming.
Review By [atticus] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from lorwen
Review:
good story...
:)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [8 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from XinnLagjin
Review:
I'm in love with this story already and can't wait to see what you come up with. My Xander muse has been as silent as a grave before this story. But its so gloriously dark comedy I can't help but rattle off in my head all the little so funny but so wrong scenarios that caused Xander to get sent to Arkham. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! And is it alright if I experiment using this scenario as well? Cuase this gem is too good to give up.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it so far. It will be a bit before I get back to this one though. I have a bunch of scenes for this (as I'm sure you can imagine from you comments) and I'm not sure how all of them fit together or within the overall plot I've worked out for the story yet. I might end up posting some as a 'deleted scenes' type of chapter.

I have no problems with you (or anyone else) experimenting with this, or any of my other story/drabble ideas for that matter. I would appreciate a message so I can read it once it's posted though :)
Review By [XinnLagjin] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting so far. Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from AllenPitt
Review:
hm...so maybe Xander was fighting a human-looking demon, killed it, and it got caught on some store's video? So he's thought to be a homicidal maniac? Strange that Buffy / Willow wouldn't break him out, though, especially considering where he's been sent....
Comments from author:
There is a rhyme and reason to it all... to be revealed at a later date when I get off my lazy ass and write it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
COOL! This is totally awesome! Xander is in Arkham?! WHY?! I loved what he did to Scarecrow. LOL Just BAM! Knocked his ass out. That was great. I almost died laughing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it. Of course, now Xander has to deal with a pissed off Scarecrow later on.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from umino
Review:
This looks super interesting. I'm not sure where you intend to take this but I'm looking forward to reading it.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it, thanks.
Review By [umino] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from pkoceres
Review:
Interesting premise! Can't wait to see what you do with it.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like it.
Review By [pkoceres] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from Runewolf
Review:
Very dark, but well constructed.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I've done dark one-shots before, but never a longer fic like this is going to be. Hopefully I can keep the tone going without veering into my safe zone too much.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Boles, eh? I seem to recall a Batman: TAS series character by that name that was so control-obsessed he wound up trying to lock away the Commissioner and everyone else that lost him his job when his rampant abuse was uncovered..

Xander got put in slam when his fighting and issues got publicised as delusions, then? Wolfram and Hart WILL pay for this in the end...
Comments from author:
Not sure about TAS, it's been awhile and I don't recall the episode off hand, but he was in the game Batman: Arkham Asylum. It would make sense with what happened to the Commissioner in it. While the game wasn't technically part of TAS' universe, they did like to send nods that way (the biggest being Kevin Conroy and Mark Hamill reprising their roles as Batman and Joker).

As for Xander being locked up, well you'll have to wait a bit to see what's going on there.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Abyss" from vitruvian
Review:
So, the actual doctors aren't involved in patient intake at all? That doesn't sound like the comics.
Comments from author:
The doctors are there and will be involved more in processing once they actually get inside the building. It's not going to be exactly like the comics/movies/shows/games. Different stories have shown Arkham differently over the years, or at least gave a different feel to it. At least in my opinion anyway. To me some stories portrayed it more prison-like than asylum and some vise-versa. I'm going to be drawing on those different sources and my own imagination to create my own version of Arkham for the story.
Review By [vitruvian] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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