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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DebraN
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I like the way you've tied the Winchesters and Xander together. It was interesting seeing John interact with Ellen and Bobby. I admit I'd like to see how the Winchesters would deal with Buffy and the Scoobies. I hope you'll be continuing with this story soon.
Review By [DebraN] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Woo! Dean you're a dork. LOL Xander welcome to the wonderful travel world of the Winchesters! LOL
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Woo! Dean you're a dork. LOL Xander welcome to the wonderful travel world of the Winchesters! LOL
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from spike
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Like the idea of Xander being Sam's twin brother also glad he saved John from making that deal with the demon
Review By [spike] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mamarhea
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Yea! You updated!

I love this story. I've been tracking it for a while. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
Hopefully the next one will come soon.
Review By [mamarhea] • Date [6 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from msdarque
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Loved reading it! I totally like this idea of Xander being Sam's twin. :D
I think Sam and Dean are good for Xander.
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [6 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from msdarque
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Quite interesting and refreshing! I would really love to read more. :)
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from spacey
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This is pretty awesome! Do you have any more? Is john gonna keep being not dead?
Review By [spacey] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Past Donor)trenee
Review:
please update they all just got together and johns alive and its getting so freakin good .. please and thank you
Review By [(Past Donor)trenee] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from DarkFaerieYumi
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OMG! Update soon! I love this fic! The clowns things was so funny
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from DarkFaerieYumi
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OMG! Will you update soon! PLEASE?!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Zith
Review:
This is one of my tracked stories--it's an interesting and unique take on Xander being a Winchester.
However, this chapter is a little confusing--I think you need scene breaks of some sort. I noticed a couple times where dialogue from one scene flowed directly into dialogue from the next, but there was no indication of the scene change, so it took a second to figure out. Also, for someone who either hasn't seen the Supernatural episode in the chapter, or is like me and has forgotten the details, you might want to give a little more explanation to what is happening. Not remembering what was going on was adding to my confusion.
I would say, though, even with the confusion, I enjoyed the action and the family bonding and definitely want to see more.

~Zith
Review By [Zith] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from kayron
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Hey the twin brothers share a clown phobia! It's great to have something in common!
Review By [kayron] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from MerKat
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The jumps in the story are a bit confusing but still a good chapter. Like that the family is trying to include Xander.
Review By [MerKat] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from kayron
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I just read through the story again. I find it interesting that Bobby describes Xander as too serious most of the time. While back in SunnyDale his friends just see him as an amiable clown. I also took note of Bobby telling John that Xander was tired, but that he just needed time to rest before hunting again. John wants Xander to join the family business on the road. Back at home Buffy and Willow wanted to make Xander 'fray adjacent' because he was 'only normal' and he might get hurt. All of this makes me wonder if Xander will stay with his family or go back to the 'Dale.
Comments from author:
Let me know what you think of ch6. Not telling whether or not he'll go back to the 'Dale.
Review By [kayron] • Date [30 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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