This story was really really interesting. The idea that xander just xeroed in on John, from Cleveland to Colorado, is amazing! I'd love to see this story played out a bit more. To see how Xander fits into Atlantis and its people. To see how Xander does as a soldier! I'd like to see how he reacts to the Wraith! I'd like to see how he and John become a team, like Blair and Jim.
Review By [kayron] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Oooo, love this. If this is what is distracting you from Whispers then I'm fine with that. ;) Please keep writing. I'll happily read whatever you come up with next.
He was there, but he didn't get a chance to say anything. Teal'c, Teyla and Ronon were singled out because they're not from Earth. This made them noticeable to the Buffy, Faith and Willow. He will get a chance to, er, dispense of his wisdom at another time.
Review By [hottmess] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Wonderful. I love how you get the various groups together, all of them experienced with first contact and general strangeness, and it all goes relatively smoothly.
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
At first, when you said, "John" I expected 20 year old John O'Neill, not 40 year old John Shepard. Nice to see everyone acting as mature adults. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
he he. Didn't even think of Mini-me. For some reason, I can be very literal at times, so, to me, he's Jon, not John.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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