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Review of chapter "Simple Solutions for Complex Problems" from Fayari
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Entitlement?! The hell, if someone I had saved at great risk to my own life acted like the bitch Buffy did, I would probably react the same way. Somehow, it's XANDER acting entitled when Buffy actually believes she's somehow the center of the fucking universe?
Review By [Fayari] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revenge is a Dish..." from LordSia
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Cool, though parts were very confusing. Bonus for clarifying a lot of stuff for one who haven't seen the series - in particular the whole Angel/Buffy/Xander triangle drama. You ought to throw Willow a bone though... Or maybe let the Hyena have her? Hmmm...
Decisions, decisions...
Review By [LordSia] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revenge is a Dish..." from Gideon
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Freaky indeed. I'm glad everyone is back in their own bodies now.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revenge is a Dish..." from eriktheviking
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Great fun but a definite tease.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revenge is a Dish..." from Riniko
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Very nice story, quite funny at times. First chance I've had to read things since the last review two chapters ago. Don't think it is just me, the site's all screwed up now and hand to find the fics I am following. Looking forward to reading your dark ending next.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revenge is a Dish..." from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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Interesting. Don't think I've seen a story like this before. Must have been a long while since the last update, as I almost didn't even remember this one. Enjoyable read.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [8 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revenge is a Dish..." from Rob
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Interesting story, but Giles got off WAY to lightly. What he did was more like something 'magic junkie' Willow would have done.
Review By [Rob] • Date [8 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Simple Solutions for Complex Problems" from Infinix
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I like the concept behind this and even some of the minor details and embellishments you added. The execution however could use some work. It seemed like you were trying to convey just how confused Xander and Buffy were feeling but mostly just made for a confusing read. There were quite a few places where it felt like I was missing something vital in the conversation like I had entered half way.

A good effort but could use some more polish.
Comments from author:
Really? At what point did I make it seem like you were walking into a conversation half-way through it?

Expanded information would be helpful so I can understand your feelings on the matter.

Did I really make things too confusing? I don't see how. Honestly. I mean was it because I would switch between Buffy and 'Buffy' or Xander and 'Xander'? Or because I was refering to them by their proper genders while they were in the other's body?

I'm glad the overall concept however met with your interest.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Patrol" from Elleria
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Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Patrol" from CrystalBlaze
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If Buffy doesn't get with the program soon, this is going to turn into Hell for everyone, maybe literally.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Patrol" from BrotherBludgeon
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Depending on how literally you take that passage from the book Giles read, this could wind up a heck of a lot worse than a body swap.

The soul remains in a body "for all eternity?" How is the end result of that not a zombie?
Comments from author:
Uh... I don't know, if it's an Immortal? Maybe?
Review By [BrotherBludgeon] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Patrol" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update but I thought MommaH would've put Buffy straight.
Comments from author:
I have a feeling Momma H was a little too busy putting Buffy horizontally inside of their now shared mind. ;)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Patrol" from Greywizard
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Well, first off, that last paragraph makes me want to smack Giles with a small hammer or something similar for his exceedingly sloppy research on such an important subject. Then I'd want to smack him in the kneecaps with the same hammer to give him incentive to do better in the future.

As far as the various characterizations are concerned, I don't think you went overboard on any of them. Buffy was pretty constantly somewhat goo-goo-eyed over Angel, and Xander never really tried to conceal his disdain or dislike for the Brooding One, so you've got them both pretty solid as far as that goes.

As best I can determine, in canon, no one ever discussed how or why Xander showed up with Angel in the Master's lair to resuscitate Buff. Because Xander's name was the first word out of her mouth after she regained consciousness and the fact that, in the Season Two opener, 'When She Was Bad, after pole-dancing on Xander, she asked him, "Did I ever thank you for saving me?", why Buffy would believe Angel was the one who saved her needs to be explained in a good bit more detail.

And as far as Buffy's comment that Xander sucks as the Slayer, he or someone else there should ask her specifically just how well she did on her first night out Slaying as compared to how he did, how many vampires she dusted and what injuries she received while doing so.

And once this mess is over, I also wouldn't put it past Xander to comment to Buffy about some of her 'toys,' or ask her if she'd like copies of some 'interesting' pictures of her that he came into possession of.

And something *definitely* needs to be done to embarrass/humiliate Cordelia after everything is worked out, because I can't see Xander letting something like that slide without some sort of retribution happening.
Comments from author:
Are you sure??? I could have sworn the first words out of her mouth were Angel... Huh? Maybe I'll re-watch that episode when I get a minute. If I need to make a retcon heavy explainy chapter or something it might help if I'm not screwing up official cannon. :D

Your other comments are most chuckle worthy and fear not Cordelia will be involved before this whole mess ends... I'm sure Xander would love to get her back for what she's done to him today.

Thanks for your review Greywizard I must say it's cheered me up after the scathing review I read earlier this afternoon before leaving.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Patrol" from Raider
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you mean to tell me, giles did this?!

talk about from out of left field.

well played sir.
Review By [Raider] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Patrol" from Riniko
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Oh, things are not looking good for the old insight trick right now.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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