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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from lunalurker
Review:
I seem to be going through a rereading old favorites phase, and this story still holds up nicely. Cheers!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [14 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from DieselDriver
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This story is a lot of fun to read. Kept me away from my Everquest for several hours.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Consequences" from DieselDriver
Review:
Really good so far except for one thing. There is no airport at Los Angeles Air Force Base. The closest place to land would have been LAX (Los Angeles Airport). Look it up on Google maps and you'll see. I've never understood why they called it a base. It's not a base, best it could be is a detachment or a station.

Other than that a good read. I look forward to getting on with the story. But I'd like to see this corrected.

Thanks for posting the story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from hjdevnull
Review:
Great story and a super-enjoyable read. Thanks so much for taking the time to write it!
Review By [hjdevnull] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from KEmperor
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Just finished reading this story. It's well written and very good. I enjoyed it.
Review By [KEmperor] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Obsidian
Review:
Awesome story! Great read. thanks!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
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This and Legend are two of my favorite stories on the site.
Hope you continue writing at this level.
Thanks for working hard to keep your character true to their author's original concepts. I am discovering that that is sadly a rare concern in fanfic.
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from jakedaman
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O M G!! This was fantastic! I never would've thought of ising Haili! I loved it! Hope u have a sequal on the books.
Review By [jakedaman] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from unicornzvi
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This was a nice story, if you rewrote the ending it could have been a great story. You have excellent characterization and have the two worlds fit together very well with a plausible reason for not getting a battalion or two of troops to help or a bunch of gunships, or other significant amounts of military support (something canon SG isn't that good at providing.

You did a very good job of setting up the final fight, I was even able to ignore the fact that if they knew there was a cliff there they should have rigged the bomb to be dropped - until you pointed out they had part of the rig designed to allow the bomb to be dropped. There's no reason for them to not simply throw the bomb off the ledge. If they needed to have it placed in a precise location you could still have an excuse for the rest of the sequence.

Then the slashed tires and Thor. Given the stated running speed of a Slayer I do not think riding a bus through city streets would have gotten them out of town much faster, the reaction to seeing the vehicles disabled should not have been "oh no! what can we do?" standing around helplessly, it should have been the slayers grabbing Andrew, Jack, Willow and anyone else who can't ran at over 40mph and get out of the area. Then Thor showing up in the precise moment needed was one of the most annoying deux ex machinas I have ever read (made worse by the fact that it wasn't needed).

I did like the description of Hailey's new job, and the slayers interactions with the U.S government but Hailey keeping her old job in addition to the new seems implausible.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Javian
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Neat story. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [Javian] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Vickzie
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Absolutely brilliant story!!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Fyrecat
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Great story! This is the first fic I have found that was not focused on one of the main cannon characters. I really enjoyed it. Thanks!
Review By [Fyrecat] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from lunalurker
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Finished another long one, hooray! And enjoyed it quite a bit. Good character details. I liked the portrayal of Hailey and Faith in particular.
I'm sure I missed some Stargate references, not being regular viewer of the show, but that didn't seem to be a problem.
All in all, a nice and realistic-sounding twist on the finale storyline of Buffy. Thanks so much for writing!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
A brilliant story, that glitters like a mirrored skyscraper in a city of crystal spires at noon. In thanks for such a wonder I give you this link to some good music I found on youtube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NC4qAgnw8S8.
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from BillieBog
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Great, great, great story. Always liked Hailey and this is the first substantial story I have read with her as the main character.

Thanks so much for sharing
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [27 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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