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Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from jebbypal
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Fantastic universe. Love it
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from twlight
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This is a wonderful story so far I do hope that you are able to come back to this again soon.
Review By [twlight] • Date [13 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from Elleria
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Ever going to be more of this? I would like to see more please.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from sekmarc
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I really like what you've done with the story so far, it's unfortunate that it's been left on the shelf for so long. Any chance of it being picked up again?
Review By [sekmarc] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from Angelskuuipo
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This is a pretty awesome premise. I look forward to seeing where you go with it. :)
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from jgoodman
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Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from msdarque
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Fun, intriguing... I'd love to read more! :D Please....
Congrats and many kudos! Go Xander!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from Nyn
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I just read this again and enjoyed it even more this time. I really, really wish you'd add to it!
Review By [Nyn] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from Scorpio
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Such an interesting series. Would love to see more. It'd be interesting to see how Xander handles Gate travel, Wraith, and Rodney's big fat mouth.
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from slmncpm
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hmmm interesting premise, would be interesting to see more.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [29 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from fayannr
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This is very good! I like the idea of Xander as the Sentinel. It'll be interesting to see how he relates to John as his Guide. I would like Ronon to see just what a "little pat" from Faith or Buffy is like. I hope you update soon.
Review By [fayannr] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from DarkFaerieYumi
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SO COOL! I like this.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from VillageOrchid
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Cool "piece" of the story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from banner
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This is an interesting idea. There are so many possibilities. I can't wait for more.


Skip this if you don't like reader suggestions, ok? No insult is intended.

One of Xander's leading characteristics is his ability to make friends. He brings out the best in people. Most of all, he's strongly inclined to be an integral part, the heart, of a group.

I wouldn't mind seeing how Xander and Sheppard actually met - did Xander's instincts simply lead him to his Guide, or were they chance-met? And how long has John been on Earth? It would be an interesting twist if Xander's senses hadn't started to actually spike until his Guide was accessible to give support. Or if they started spinning out of control when his prospective Guide moved completely out of reach to Atlantis.

The spirit guides were major influences later in the series. Xander's might well be a hyena.

One of Jim's least attractive characteristics was the way he fought tooth and nail against the senses and the accompanying mystical aspects and primitive behaviors. He resented his abilities throughout the series, long after he was forced to acknowledge their usefulness. I hated the abuse he often heaped on Blair for not being able to make Ellison normal. Xander is far more adaptable and much more respectful of academicians and mystics.

If Sentinel senses are a naturally evolved aspect of the human genome, then it is undoubtedly distributed wherever homo sapiens sapiens has spread. Teyla and Ronan might have some relevant information if so. If the Sentinel is the result of a spell, like the original Slayer creation and like Willow's universal activation spell, then it might not have made it off the planet. RA was kicked out and the 'Gate buried some 5k years ago. The slayer spell was much older - the Slayer was the only reason humanity managed to survive long enough to develop a civilization. Building pyramids, for example.

Once the Goa'uld and Jaffa were gone, along with their weapons and rapid transportation, then another defense against the ongoing threats to humanity needed to be developed. A spell to make watchmen seems like a reasonable possibility. Although I'd be surprised if the need for the Guide was foreseen at the time.

If any of these ideas inspire you, please use them!
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Colliding Worlds" from twlight
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I like this chapter. I look forward to more.
Review By [twlight] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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