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The Child of Rao: Book II

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Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from SpacedCadet
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TWO YEARS!!!
Please update.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [20 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Jimbobob
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This has been a very fun story, and I'm a little sad to see that it probably won't be updated again.
Review By [Jimbobob] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from agnar
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Hoping you'll come back to this some day. Was just re-reading this and felt like reviewing on a couple things that bugged me. Not about your writing, which is great. But about the attitude of the JL which you pretty accurately portray.

In ch. 5 it bugged me no end that J'onn thought the JL had any right to tell anyone how to use their powers so long as they don't break the law. Artists use their talents to make money, athletes the same, etc. *Everyone* is allowed, even encouraged to use their talents to make a living.

But Xander's amish character is somehow wrong to use his speed power to work as a messenger? Bullshit. Or his strength to work construction? Again bullshit. That hypocrisy pisses me off, though it is an accurate portrayal of their attitude.

The other thing was the JL's bullshit attitude after the crab demon incident. Yeah I get Cadmus was stirring shit up to hurt the League's reputation. But it felt like the League was agreeing that Xander's crew was in the wrong, that they did something wrong, by cowtowing to the public and telling them to lay low afterwards.

They should have had Xander and crews back, put on a fucking press conference and back them to the hilt that they did the RIGHT thing, they did nothing wrong and they saved human lives. Not this pussy footing around, half-assed bullshit they did pull.

Honestly I kinda felt like Xander and his ladies would've been better off on their own, without the League. While the League means well and can handle the alien/worldwide stuff, they seem to be condescending and arrogant, and lose sight of the regular stuff. And I'm not sure I see Xander and his ladies really wanting to be ordered about by anyone like they get after dealing with Cadmus and the Watchers council.
Review By [agnar] • Date [15 May 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Addlcove
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Having just re-read this in it's entirety, again, I would like to congratulate you on the ability to weave a fascinating and enchanting story :)

Hope you plan to go back to this story at some point in the future :)
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [8 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from FinalGuardian
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I love the story, I just hope it gets updated soon/hasn't been abandoned.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Bill
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Good! But I'd be the Muslims who'd go most apeshit over the old gods coming back.(One thing you NEVER bring up to a practicing Muslim is polytheism.)
Review By [Bill] • Date [6 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from brnmac
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Are you planning to continue this story? If so, when?
Review By [brnmac] • Date [11 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from raxadian
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Ah Luthor... always good for a laugh, that fellow.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from raxadian
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Quality writing indeed.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from raxadian
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THAT was important?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from raxadian
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Women, why so angry?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from raxadian
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Idiots, whatever team they sent is gonna be koed...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from raxadian
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Conner gonna be a daddy?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from raxadian
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Ah yes, the drawbacks of an accelerated metabolism.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from raxadian
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Poor little Ultimen.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
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