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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LordSia
Review:
... Awesome. As it should be. I'm partial to Xander-based fics, but this, this is Warhammer!
How can I not track this?!
Only pity is that it lacks a lot of detail, descriptive detail; the plot seems plenty complicated to me.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JoeDineen
Review:
Just stumbled across this, delayed me from studing LINQ to SQL for a short while. Interesting story and I for one would like to read more. Brings back memories of running Death on the Riek and Shadows over Bornhafen many years ago.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
This story is rather good. I'm not keen on the Warhammer world but you're writing it well and making it entertaining.

The layout would be improved, however, if you put spaces between the paragraphs. Doing so would make the story a lot easier to read.

Addition: I use Word 2007 but if you can't afford that you could get OpenOffice as a free download. It's clumsy compared to Word but it has the same WYSIWYG benefits.
Comments from author:
Mmm, this is something I struggle with. In Notepad, the story appears to be formatted properly, and it looks fine when I view it on TtH, but many people note that the paragraphs are too close together. Perhaps I need to start uploading in html...

What program do you use to write your stories, before you upload them?
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Cristina
Review:
wow..this is interesting ... I'm so tracking this
Review By [Cristina] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, the damsel is dead --good thing a Knight found her, otherwise Buffy might get blamed (and at first I thought it was the "Fae" part he was shocked by) -- hm, bad news on Lucile, but in a way it's good news--there was something she could have told Buffy or helped her with, is my guess, that's why she was eliminated.
Any chance anything else came through a portal while they were all open? Just a thought... (I've read original plan was for Angel in Pylea to see a flying dragon, then in "The Gift" it flies out of the portal, but they didn't have the budget or something)---hey whatever happened to it anyway?
Maybe Buffy can get a nice set of leather or chain mail armor while at the castle? Or a prophetic dream, those come in handy sometimes...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
An interesting beginning with Buffy in the Warhammer world. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from tealruby
Review:
I have to admit the description made me pass this one by at first (and I'm a Warhammer player), but it's quite nice and keep it going.
Review By [tealruby] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from war
Review:
so something used the undead attack to slip in and kill the Damsel? sounds like Buffy is gonna be busy here.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShurikVch
Review:
I don't get it: how the vamp know she was a slayer... No, how the vamp know she exist at all and where is she?
Vampires in Warhammer not a clairvoyant, it's more an elven or Chaos stuff. And vampires never work for elves and almost never - for Chaos.
Review By [ShurikVch] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jaeger
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I can only imagine the confusion of the knights when she tells them she is a slayer...
After all, she really doesn't look like a short, hairy bloke with a beer gut.
Review By [jaeger] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
Level with me. There are no malls in this dimension, right? Poor Buffy. Maybe she can become a Damsel. Wait... do you have to be, like, super religious for that? .
She'll be getting real impatient dealing with the culture here, I can see that right off...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeB
Review:
I enjoyed that a lot.

Looking forward to the continuation.

I am having a bit of a problem with Buffy knowing dueling terminology though, she's always struck me as the 'see target vamp, kill target vamp' type.

I am looking forward to Buffy explaining to the two knights exactly who she is.

I'm not all that familiar with Warhammer, I just hope it's a brighter world than WH 40K.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to you next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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