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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Your Dawn fits well in the death and destruction of this world. I guess growing up as she did has made her a survivor.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from amusewithaview
Review:
MOAR!

Please?
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
I definitely want to know what's happening with this story
Comments from author:
:) I definitely fail at commenting on reviews in a timely manner. But thanks nonetheless!
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from thegenuineimitation
Review:
Excellent beginning I can't wait to see what you decide to do with it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!

There will be more, it is just a little slow in coming. :(
Review By [thegenuineimitation] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is a very dark little story, but I liked it. Of course there aren't many bright and shinny Terminator stories. Lol!
Comments from author:
Really glad that you liked it, despite its darkness. Yeah, I don't think there are many bright and shiny Terminator stories, the world itself is kinda dreary.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BillieBog
Review:
Good start. Loved the movie and love Dawn stories. Can't wait for the next chapter

Billie
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review - glad you liked it. :)
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
FREAKING AWESOME!!!
Comments from author:
*grins* Thanks so much sweetie. I fail at timely commenting (obviously) but I really appreciate the review!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Review:
Awesome beginning! I'm loving your bitter!Dawn and also I'm curious as to how she knows Marcus.

Anywho, I can't wait to read more! Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review. Bitter!Dawn is kinda awesome and wicked fun to write. More will be explained when my darned muse finally writes the rest! :)
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dawnieelf
Review:
good beginning, and very well written. I hope to see more soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [dawnieelf] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
Very cool story. And I love that it has Dawn too. :) I hope there is more.
Comments from author:
I knew you would love the Dawn aspect. There will be more once that fickle muse of mine finally gets it written.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spikeismine
Review:
Oooo, you have my attention with that ending, I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DJFrost
Review:
Awesome start, I love it! Can't wait to find out how Dawn knows Marcus. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. The rest is slow in coming, but there will be more.
Review By [DJFrost] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NutsContract
Review:
Ok... I'm totally weirded out by this story but in a good way. I love the idea of a bitter Dawn, because well, who wouldn't be bitter? I am really curious to know more about the Dawn and John hatred-not hatred story. And, how exactly is Dawn related to Marcus? Update soon, please and thank you!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Sadly the rest will be a little delayed in coming, but there will be more!
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
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