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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
A very interesting start to this series. I have to admit, that Xander as a CSI would be a interesting career choice for him. Now, time to put this to use.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
that was different than the soldier ...
great story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
The interaction between Gil and Xander was very in-character and really fun to read. Nice work!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Pretty cool. Is Las Angeles a made up city name, like they used "Bay City" for Starsky and Hutch when they wanted it to look like SF (but shot in LA and gradually gave up on trying to make it look like anything but LA)?
Comments from author:
Oops, that's just a typo that wasn't caught with the last spell check. Thanks for catching it, I'll be sure to correct it over my next re-read. Thank you,
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from shichan
Review:
CSI Xander is awesome. I would luv for you to keep going with this story!!
Review By [shichan] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MissE
Review:
Cool. A different cross :) And a very interesting future for Xander. I would love to see more on this, from both sides. Sounds like fun.
Review By [MissE] • Date [25 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WingL
Review:
A nice Halloween story; different from the usual. Thank you for writing this. Might you also be considering a follow-up of some sort where Xander has finished his studies and does eventually meet up with Gil Grissom? Thank you again.
Review By [WingL] • Date [25 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
No super strength or super powers, but Grissom is a highly intelligent analytical and resourceful guy. Having his kind of knowledge could be highly beneficial for Xander and to the Scoobies. I liked the story.
Review By [kayron] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
The situation, the preparation, and the duel point of view was very well done. Deciding not to spend time re-writing the events of the evening word for word worked.

This is a concept I would like to see more of if the muse takes you.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordSia
Review:
NO! To good, to much potential, why did you end it there?!
Damn it...
Review By [LordSia] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Good story. I think I would like to see some more of this story.

Perhaps Xander could pay a visit to Las Vegas during his road trip.

In looking back, I found a section that didn't fit in with the rest of the story.

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The events of the night passed and soon a new day rose.

Buffy and Angel did the big deed, which resulted in a series of events that revealed a few hic-ups to their ‘happily ever after’, in the slayer’s mind. It also led to another near apocalypse that needed to be dealt with in a timely fashion, but that tale has already been told.

Willow knew during the course of that time, that something had changed within Xander, but it was nothing that she could put her finger on. It was one thing to know that he was doing better in school, but what she couldn’t figure out was how or why. She encouraged him with words, but there was always something about him keeping his distance from her and eventually she turned her heart towards another.
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Since you're talking about how Halloween affected Xander, I think you should remove the section about Buffy and Angel and confine your discussion to how Xander and Willow were affected.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wandmaker
Review:
A very well-written piece with a dual POV. Truthfully, as long as we're talking about POV, and what a brief melding w/Grissom has done to enlighten and expand Xander - it would be utterly cool to see the other side of the same story coin.

I realize that the spirit of the CSI costume is not necessarily the same as an actual possession by Grissom, himself - but it would be wonderful to see an epilogue where Grissom ends up remembering some of his time with Xander.
Review By [Wandmaker] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TDK
Review:
This was a unique take on the YAHF. You did a outstanding job writing it.
Review By [TDK] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing and full of potential for more.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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