Love the picture idea. It definitely makest the OC's more real. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [13 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "back and forth" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "back and forth" from Missingviolet
Review:
it's cute to read their conv in email format, quite original and freaking briliant! plus the fact that you managed to find pics that some how are able to express the emotional/physical state of your characters. i cant wait for the adults to reply! i'm hoping it'll be just as hilarious! thank you for making my day! happy last day of new year! :)
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [26 Feb 10] • Not Rated
The guy's e-mails sound just like I imagine young adult guys sound like when they're talking to each other. Not that I'd know...people always seem to be on their best behaviour around me--but your guys' language feels just right. Well written!
I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Yeah, I've grown up around all males so getting the language down is pretty easy for me.
I'm glad you liked.
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [25 Feb 10] • Not Rated