Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Not Frigging Wonderland" from Neverwillmini
I think you've established that Thomas needs to do the opposite of whatever implulse he happens to have at the moment. Going off to explore, alone, after 1) carelessly breaking open the 'mysterious' magic'ed box, and 2) getting them stranded in a different world/dimension with out leaving at least a copy of the note so Willow had some idea of where to search, is making me think he was dropped on his head VERY often as a baby.
Comments from author:
What can I say, he's a sixteen year old boy...a sixteen year old boy that was raised by Faith. He will grow up...you know eventually. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Review By [Neverwillmini
] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]