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Review of chapter "parts 104 & 105" from Harry
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Well, you crafted a nice ending. Victor is going to stay in Sunnydale for a while, spend a lot more time with Joyce. And with this group that is hunting mutants setting up shop in Sunnydale, he may be needed. The Scoobies are going to relax for a day or so. And the trio that left Sunnydale are starting to learn to feel like people again, after being in Sunnydale for so long. I know you have a lot of stories in the pipeline that need to be finished up, including your story with Willow and Draco at Hogwarts, but could you MAYBE think of doing a sequel to this story? Might be interesting to see how it would work out.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 101 to 103" from Harry
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Well, it looks like there is going to be a LOT of questions asked, and not just of the Initiative. A lot of people are getting the CD's and some people in Sunnydale are starting to wake up from being in a state of denial for so long! Lots of questions are going to be asked, and not many of the answers are going to go over well.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 98 to 100" from Harry
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Looks like this time, the Sunnydale PD is NOT doing what it used to do. This time, they are loaded to handle such creatures and are ready to dish out punishment.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 95 to 97" from Harry
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Looks like Sheila REALLY got a shock to wake her up! She found out that what was coming out from the ground were not mutants, but DEMONS! I think that Sauron had the right idea: Hide, wait and get out of town.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 93 and 94" from Harry
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Bye Bye Maggie. You just got ate due to your refusal to see that what you were doing was ruining the project. Your ADAM's are gone, the Military and other groups are looking into what is going on. And Lykos? Why do I foresee Sauron returning in the future?
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 91 and 92" from Harry
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Well, it looks like SHIELD and some other military groups are starting to take a interest in the Initiative group in Sunnydale. And Riley is feeling that while the Military may not be for him, he may want to spend a lot more time with Buffy's group.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 89 and 90" from Harry
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Sounds like Sheila got a wakeup call. Problem is, its taking a LOT for it to sink in! And that is something that is going to make her wonder what else she she has been missing out on.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 87 and 88" from Harry
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Well, those who were going off to New York are airborne. Bye Bye Sunnydale. You won't see them again. And Sheila, you DON'T know your daughter! If you and Ira weren't so busy on the lecture tour, you would find out that your daughter is a lot smarter and a lot more mature than you give her credit for.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 84 to 86" from Harry
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Whoever this clown is that is running the search for Charlie, is going to be in DEEP TROUBLE! And their is one simple reason why they are in trouble. Nick Fury is coming. And that means SHIELD! And first he is going to take the DIR operation in Sunnydale apart., And when he finds out that stuff was stolen, he is going to go and find out who did it. And those clowns are going to be in REALLY DEEP TROUBLE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 81 to 83" from Harry
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Sounds to me like whoever is running the hunt for Charlie and any other mutants managed to get into the DRI Initiative base and take a LOT of weapons and paperwork! I think that SHIELD and the government are going to be paying Sunnydale a visit VERY soon!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 78 to 80" from Harry
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UH OH CHONGO! The DRI just found themselves in some DEEP TROUBLE! When Nick Fury decides to get involved, something STINKS and BIG TIME! SHIELD does not normally get involved in domestic matters, but when something like this comes along, its time to lay the SMACKDOWN and big time.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 75, 76, and 77" from Harry
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For once, the initiative and the X-Men are in the same boat. Neither group likes being in Sunnydale. The only ones who want to be in Sunnydale are the mutant hunters. And sooner or later, they are going to run into the vampires and demons. Then, it will be BYE BYE Hunters!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 72 to 74" from Harry
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Well, Tara has a crush on Charlie and is thinking about maybe seeing how that goes after they get to Xavier's. But the news about Mystique and Irene shocked the living daylights out of her! And with the anonymous email going out, looks like Maggie Walsh is going to be in for some HOT WATER!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 69 to 71" from Harry
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Maggie, you and your group from the DRI had best prepare to pack up and head out of town, if what Willow found on the computer is what they think it is. And with the help that Mr. and. Mrs. Rosenberg, the word is going to get out. And then, a LOT of headaches for the government are going to be happening!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 66 to 68" from Harry
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Between Jean, Scott and Xavier, along with Willow, the word can get out. Red can handle the computer part, the X-Men the word of mouth contacts. Time to set up the network!
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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