this was interesting

ok euhm if I read it right Dawn earned her place with the gods. What did she do to earn that place. Her Mom/sister on the other hand did everything to protect her even dieing so how did Dawn earn her place. If you had wrote she has a right to live between them that would be a whole other matter but earned it. I don't understand that part. Don't get me wrong I like the story. I don't want to say something bad I only don't understand how she can earn something she didn't do anything for. If you know what I mean.

OK I'm done it's a lovely story and I loved to read it. Thank you for writing it.

Edit: I understands it's her right to stay there if she wanted to, but your wrote:
"Hecate smiled. "You have done well," she said. "You have earned a place here for the rest of your days, should you desire it"

That confuses me. I understand that Buffy didn't have that right and Dawn has. The earning part was the part that confuses me. And no I didn't read it yet. I'm going to but first I have to read some updates before I can.

Who said it was a matter of 'earning', as you mean it? Dawn's Hecate's daughter; Buffy isn't. Hecate incarnated her for a purpose; that purpose is served. Voila; reason enough for her. Plus, it might serve *more* interesting purposes to take the Key back in a body rather than otherwise, so why not make the offer? Etc., etc. Have you ever read Greek myth? They're rather capricious deities.

This was awesomeness!! BtVS/Percy Jackson crossover is so cool (and very rare...) and Dawn as a half-blood? Is just bloody brilliant and makes lots of sense :) I usually don't read drabbles (I always end up wanting more) but I really did love this and I'm so glad that I've read it.

Thanks for writing!!

That was a sweet little ficlet-story, and I quite enjoyed the golf cart ride!

Strawberry fields? Perfect.

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"Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see.
It's getting hard to be someone but it all works out.
It doesn't matter much to me.

Let me take you down, 'cuz I'm going to
Strawberry Fields
Nothing is real and nothing to get hung about.
Strawberry Fields forever."

Excellent

You're brilliant to think of Hecate and her 'Key',
A favorite Percy x-over, this is to me.

:)

Dawn as a demi-god makes so much sense,
Thankfully Buffy believed and wasn't dense.

An interesting idea, thank you for sharing
as I read more I hope to continue caring :)

I think Dawn's chosen the right 'mother'
to stick with, since the other
path leads to peace and bliss,
but at the cost of life she'd miss.

I just had to say
This line made my day
It was so pithy
In this story so mythy
"Five years ago, Dawn just appeared in our lives like she'd always been there," she said, firmly. "We kept her. The end."

Oh come on, Buffy and Hecate's her mother,
When Willow Finds out, she'll really be a bother.
How about a ninth, featuring the wicked witch of the west,
Perhaps truly then, this would be the best.

First I need to read the books, the movie was not
Enough to satisfy my literary reading habit
Like those of Potter, the transition likely isn't
As smooth as most would critic.

And now my poetry is sucky,
I'll get back to reading Buffy.

fun

nice

I quite enjoy this
tale you're weaving for us.
Willow's freak-out next?

I should have seen
what most would glean
the twist you would write
It's just right