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Review of chapter "Half-Hearted Welcome" from Zarohk
Review:
Nice explanation for what the Slayers actually are. I wonder if many of the also fall under Artemis' purview, since they are young maiden huntresses. I like that you invoked the Titans, predecessor deities, whose rule fits the origin story of the Buffy'verse "This world did not begin as a paradise…". So, since you are invoking precursors to the Olympian gods, does that mean that Dawn, created by the Monks of Dagon, is one of Dagon's offspring?
Review By [Zarohk] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from loretta
Review:
this was interesting
Review By [loretta] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from bradsan
Review:
ok euhm if I read it right Dawn earned her place with the gods. What did she do to earn that place. Her Mom/sister on the other hand did everything to protect her even dieing so how did Dawn earn her place. If you had wrote she has a right to live between them that would be a whole other matter but earned it. I don't understand that part. Don't get me wrong I like the story. I don't want to say something bad I only don't understand how she can earn something she didn't do anything for. If you know what I mean.

OK I'm done it's a lovely story and I loved to read it. Thank you for writing it.

Edit: I understands it's her right to stay there if she wanted to, but your wrote:
"Hecate smiled. "You have done well," she said. "You have earned a place here for the rest of your days, should you desire it"

That confuses me. I understand that Buffy didn't have that right and Dawn has. The earning part was the part that confuses me. And no I didn't read it yet. I'm going to but first I have to read some updates before I can.
Comments from author:
Who said it was a matter of 'earning', as you mean it? Dawn's Hecate's daughter; Buffy isn't. Hecate incarnated her for a purpose; that purpose is served. Voila; reason enough for her. Plus, it might serve *more* interesting purposes to take the Key back in a body rather than otherwise, so why not make the offer? Etc., etc. Have you ever read Greek myth? They're rather capricious deities.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from LeaFairy
Review:
This was awesomeness!! BtVS/Percy Jackson crossover is so cool (and very rare...) and Dawn as a half-blood? Is just bloody brilliant and makes lots of sense :) I usually don't read drabbles (I always end up wanting more) but I really did love this and I'm so glad that I've read it.

Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from AngelBlack
Review:
That was a sweet little ficlet-story, and I quite enjoyed the golf cart ride!
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Strawberry fields? Perfect.

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"Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see.
It's getting hard to be someone but it all works out.
It doesn't matter much to me.

Let me take you down, 'cuz I'm going to
Strawberry Fields
Nothing is real and nothing to get hung about.
Strawberry Fields forever."
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
You're brilliant to think of Hecate and her 'Key',
A favorite Percy x-over, this is to me.

:)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Half What, Now?" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Dawn as a demi-god makes so much sense,
Thankfully Buffy believed and wasn't dense.

An interesting idea, thank you for sharing
as I read more I hope to continue caring :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I think Dawn's chosen the right 'mother'
to stick with, since the other
path leads to peace and bliss,
but at the cost of life she'd miss.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from (Recent Donor)Mari
Review:
I just had to say
This line made my day
It was so pithy
In this story so mythy
"Five years ago, Dawn just appeared in our lives like she'd always been there," she said, firmly. "We kept her. The end."
Review By [(Recent Donor)Mari] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from AlexanderMcpherson
Review:
Oh come on, Buffy and Hecate's her mother,
When Willow Finds out, she'll really be a bother.
How about a ninth, featuring the wicked witch of the west,
Perhaps truly then, this would be the best.

First I need to read the books, the movie was not
Enough to satisfy my literary reading habit
Like those of Potter, the transition likely isn't
As smooth as most would critic.

And now my poetry is sucky,
I'll get back to reading Buffy.
Review By [AlexanderMcpherson] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half of Both Worlds" from Bobboky
Review:
fun
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half Summers" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Half Summers" from amusewithaview
Review:
I quite enjoy this
tale you're weaving for us.
Willow's freak-out next?
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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