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Review of chapter "End" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
oooooh, good. dark, creepy, kinda good.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from angeluscado
Review:
Definitely love this and will not say no to a sequel or continuation. There are so many interesting ways to explore this universe and I'm definitely intrigued.
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from Angrycupcake
Review:
Ok maybe this makes me a horrible person, but you can still put me on Team!Winchester. While I do agree that killing Dawn was indefensible and the Winchester's need that fact pounded into their skulls I don't want them to die. Buffy nearly murdered Faith for Angel, Willow killed Warren and with full malicious intent came damn close to murdering every single human being on the face of the planet. Xander, well, I can't think of anything for Xander but you get the point.

Sometimes you need that blasted black and white perspective to do what needs to be done. The gray, as presented on BTVS, can be just as dangerous a position to take up. How many innocent people died because Buffy didn't think going after D'Hoffryn and other active vengeance demons were worth her time? Not the same thing I know but still...

Any ways I found your story positively chilling. I hope you do a sequel. I'd love to see the Winchester POV and the confrontation with the scoobs gone bad. Good gosh Giles and the new council! How will they handle this?
Review By [Angrycupcake] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from MBelasko
Review:
Interesting fic, while I understand Buffy/xanders feelings but I wonder what the overall consequences will be, such as upsetting the chess board between heaven and hell. Pretty sure Lucifer won't be happy if his vessel is destroyed, maybe he'll turn his attention towards Buffy or just take his frustration out on Dawn.
Review By [MBelasko] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from MBelasko
Review:
Interesting fic, while I understand Buffy/xanders feelings but I wonder what the overall consequences will be, such as upsetting the chess board between heaven and hell. Pretty sure Lucifer won't be happy if his vessel is destroyed, maybe he'll turn his attention towards Buffy or just take his frustration out on Dawn.
Review By [MBelasko] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from Twoboots
Review:
Awesome! I kind of want to see what happens next!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [11 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
My initial reaction to this was 'I hope the Winchesters suffer and die.' However, when I thought about it again with a clearer head, now I'm not so sure. While they still deserve it, I don't know that I want Buffy and Xander to go dark - even momentarily. It's completely understandable that they would, but it's so sad. I'm intrigued to see what happens if you decide to do a sequel.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [11 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from Missingviolet
Review:
WOW... dark fics your new thing?
you should really continue this at least one more chapter?
i would really like to know if buffy and xander can follow through with their plan and why did dean/sammy killed dawn?
great job!
Comments from author:
Hi bubba :)
Writing is total catharsis for me, so whenever I'm in a shitty mood- I write dark fics.
It's good that you liked this.

Btw, if you want something fluffier- check out my Anya/Supernatural story. It's the newest one.
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Wow, I really loved this. I think I'd also like to see the counter too. Maybe the Hunt from Dean & Sam's POV, and then maybe when they find out they killed the wrong person (just to up the angst, though Dean will shrug it off because she was a witch after all) and then the confrontation. Maybe after they kill Dawn, Missouri will be the one to tell them they've killed an innocent, and turned three major Champions of Light to Darkness by their actions (just to keep tweaking that angst).

Even though it was a case of mistaken identity, I'll be contrary and not see anything wrong with Buffy & Xander's vengeance. Maybe D'Hoffryn will offer them work when they're done (and with the state of mind they'd be in, because after all - Dawn will still be dead and other Hunters have killed other innocent witches/demons because of their prejudices), what if they take the positions? Possibly something about vengeance for wrongful deaths or something similar. If Willow joined them using D'Hoffryn's old offer/token because of frustration at her bindings which kept her from extracting her own vengeance and not wanted to be separated from her remaining family, maybe they'll form something new (Triumvirate of Vengeance or something).
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End" from shinysolace
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Wow. Not usually a fan of dark-fic but read it anyway and wow.
I can really see the whole thing happening actually... Dawn trying to help someone; the Winchesters just barging in and shooting anything that looks supernatural; the bias against witches and absolutely anything that they don't see to be normal.
That's always pissed me off actually. It's not that I want Supernatural to be Buffy or sanctuary or any other demon/other-worldy friendly/embracing show, but the bloody bull-headedness that existed throughout the beginning of the show was really frustrating, and actually put me off the show for a while. Then there was the episode with the vampires and Dean and Sam been on opposing sides over it, and I could see that they were addressing it and that it'd be good to see how that progressed. It made sense with the back history of the hunters, that they're always outnumbered and out-gunned, but the growth that happened went to make Supernatural one of my favoured shows, that could always keep me guessing and could test my opinions and thoughts on a wide range of topics. (sorry, didn't mean to go off on one there)
Anyway, thank you for this, and I can't wait to see how it plays out. I think that the Scoobies will seek a bloody revenge, and hopefully make the boys open there eyes to the world and realise their mistakes before they're done. Would Dawn have wanted it? Maybe not. Do the Winchesters deserve it? Absolutely. (See, even through this have I realised that I'm pro bloodthirsty revenge... at least in this arena anyway!)
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from caeria
Review:
Very interesting. Like your other reviewers, I would be interested in seeing the meet up between Buffy and Xander and the Winchesters. Unlike some of your other reviewers, I don't see the Winchesters as being tricked into anything. While not stupid, they have a definite bias and a shoot first, ask no questions mentality that is very prevelant in the show.

And while I don't particularly want to see the Winchester tortured before they are killed, I do want the Winchesters to really understand what they've done and just how badly they've messed up with their narrow worldview.

Then Buffy can kill them . . . or Xander can kill them. Actually, I can see Buffy giving into the demonic side of the Slayer and wanting to kill them and maybe inflicting a little pain and then Xander stepping in at the last moment and killing the Winchesters cleanly to keep Buffy from sliding into that pit.
Review By [caeria] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from oldgirllost
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Very nice.

I think the Winchesters would start to suspect that they had killed the wrong person when more victims suffered. Then one thing after another might be revealed so that by the time Xander and Buffy catch up with them they might very well know that they have killed an innocent. Neither of them is stupid, they are conditioned to act violently, but they are not stupid, and if they've been played they will come to realize it.

This might be a plot by the forces of evil to thoroughly corrupt the White Knight, the White Witch, and the Slayer,(because what the effect of administering of a torturous death to Winchesters will do to the Scoobies is as bad as what killing Warren did to Willow, and even if Willow is not there at the kill she will be as responsible) as well as demoralizing then destroying the Winchesters.

My first reaction was "Gee I think that the Winchesters deserve what is coming to them and I hope the get it!" However the only consequences I can see are wins for the dark side.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from Jessica
Review:
I LOVED this. I enjoy fics where Winchesters get their asses kicked. Nothing is ever as black and white as they think things are. I would totally read a sequel.
Comments from author:
Well thank you!
I agree with you 100 %
Review By [Jessica] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from clockworkorange
Review:
Ooh, how delightfully dark. I'd love to see a sequel to this. I'm feeling a bit bloodthirsty in regards to the Winchesters now.
Comments from author:
I'd probably do one more chapter with their deaths.
xoxo for reviewing!
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
Wow. So good.
Comments from author:
Thank ya!
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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