Has Sam admitted to having visions yet? Because as soon as he does, I imagine Dawn would just give a huff, mumble "why didn't you say something sooner" and call Cordy (if she's not dead by this point). And if it was already passed the point where Cordelia dies, then Dawn still has some experience with friends who have the mind-exploding type visions and can maybe help him a little with what's going on.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Not Rated
hm, can't wait for them to run into the 'vampire' played by Amber Benson--maybe an ancestor of Tara's, source of the "McClay women are demons" family legend? * How about having Castiel eventually show up and bring Buffy back --from heaven... (as part of the whole fighting Lucifer thing) instead of having Dean die & get 'pulled out'...... Other possibilities-running into Angel. I doubt Dean would be very happy with him, even if assured he had a soul etc.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Interesting story; yep, the W's have had bad experiences with witches. in their stories there really just aren't any 'good' magic users. Good thing nobody's mentioned werewolves. Or vampires for that matter, they still think they're extinct. Ok, no Buffy coming back, no problem, the story is about Dawn. Should Faith show up? There's only one slayer now, she really can't stay in prison for long, the world will go straight to hell if she does. And--come to think of it--Spike made a promise to Buffy that he'd protect Dawn forever, so he's probably creepy-stalking in the background somewhere. I bet Angel would come running too, if he heard she was in trouble.
Comments from author:
Faith is in LA with Angel's group, mentioned she helped teach Dawn to use her sword when Dawn grabbed it defend herself from the demon. Sam was always more open than Dean or his Dad to the possibility of not everything Supernatural being evil so he'll listen to Dawn's explanation of her past, including the key bit. Spike's off mourning Buffy somewhere, he might be brought in a later point.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Oh so so good! Really like your version of Dawn, love Dawn and Sam together. Like how she got Sam and Dean talking. Wonder if she is going to find out everthing (same for the guys), and is she going travelling with them. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
New chap is up and some secrets have now been revealed.
Review By [sabriel] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
you've just added this story and i've read it six times today four of that was for chp2 which ... hello was way awesome please add more ,,, as an advid btvs fan i'm running out of good stories to read as i feel like ive read them all ... even the slash stories that i swore i' never read ... so please update soon
Comments from author:
Glad you like it and it has been updated.
Review By [RavenWoodbane] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh you're so evil. You made her awesome Keyness come out... but Sam wasn't even there to witness it. How will Dawn explain things to him? Well actually... as far as he knows, it was just a fire... but still. Oh this is getting so goood!! Thank you so much for updating!!
Comments from author:
Oh they'll be hearing about the nice demon that came to visit, very loudly.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Not Rated