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Review of chapter "Bunny Trouble" from Bobboky

Review:

cool

Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Bunny Trouble" from banditdoz

Review:

BWAH-HAHAHA!!!! Amazing BWAH-HAHAHA!!!! Thank you!!!!!

Comments from author:

*bows* for my next trick! *scratches head* actually, I'm not sure what I'm going to do. *shrugs* Oh well. More... eventually....

Review By [banditdoz] • Date [19 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Gifts of the Goop" from jgoodman

Review:

Love this story and can't wait to read more

Comments from author:

I'll see what I can do but no promises.

Review By [jgoodman] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Gifts of the Goop" from (Current Donor)

nerfherder

Review:

BWAH-HAHAHA!!!! Twinkies an ZPMs! Gotta love it!

Comments from author:

Merry Christmas!

Review By [ (Current Donor)

nerfherder] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "McGee faces his past" from asaloth

Review:

Not a bad start but it is over 500 miles from DC to Salem it will take them about 6-8 hrs each way.

Comments from author:

Good point. I wasn't thinking of that when I created the original chapter. It was supposed to be a one-shot, turned into a story.

Review By [asaloth] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Gifts of the Goop" from WolfWriter

Review:

Why in God's name would anyone shoot a teeny, helpless bunny? It wasn't proven to be evil, was it?

Just because it talked? That's crazy!!!

But then, the whole chapter was as well.

I bet it was an omake.

Comments from author:

I've never been quite sure what an omake is, but that fits.

Its not evil yet...

Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Gifts of the Goop" from cryefourme

Review:

Giggle giggle, I think that Xander and them got the short end of the stick when they got Ethan, and Ethan got the better deal. LOL.

Comments from author:

*snicker*

Review By [cryefourme] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Medically Necessary" from Bill

Review:

So very well done!

Comments from author:

You're welcome. I'm a little stuck as to what's going to come out of the goop though....

Review By [Bill] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Meeting Merlin pt. 2" from (Current Donor)

Hawklan

Review:

1.

hm interesting enough start to check out more.

2.

hmm the NCIS team took that all in better than i thought.

3.

ok..NCIS seems to know more about the supernatural than you would think.

4.

ahh now the trouble really begins :)

5.

hmm that was a strange way to get them back

6.

nice gifts by Merlin

Comments from author:

I'm glad that you like it up to this point. Thankfully my ability to write has gotten better and you can actually see the progress as you read this particular story. I'm still missing a proper bad guy though. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!

Review By [ (Current Donor)

Hawklan] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Medically Necessary" from (Current Donor)

vladt

Review:

would send twinkies for the evil chapter, but they are hard to find.

Comments from author:

true, true...

Review By [ (Current Donor)

vladt] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Medically Necessary" from banditdoz

Review:

Ewwwww I can only imagine what Xander thought when he woke up to that. Thanks for the update ;)

Comments from author:

No problem. :D

Review By [banditdoz] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Medically Necessary" from AkashaDrake

Review:

In honor of Hostess...TWINKIES!!!!

Comments from author:

Ah, but IF I use the Twinkies(which I'd already considered) then they can't just be ordinary Twinkies.... *smirk*

Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Medically Necessary" from TwilightHeretic

Review:

It becomes Twinkies.

Comments from author:

Ah, but IF I use the Twinkies(which I'd already considered) then they can't just be ordinary Twinkies.... *smirk*

Review By [TwilightHeretic] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Traps and Explosions" from slmncpm

Review:

oh i can't wait to hear about the different goos and what the cloud was REALLY for. hmmmm *hands you scones*

Comments from author:

Ooooh! scones! I love scones! *Munch!* Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so much.

Review By [slmncpm] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Traps and Explosions" from FireWolfe

Review:

Interesting twist. I look forward to seeing more.

Comments from author:

I'll see what I can come up with.

Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated