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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from fourmenandanelephant
Review:
I like this story, but the truth is not having Buffy, Willow, Tara,and Danielle, end up with Dawn romantically is disappointing the whole sexual torture thing with Fred is disgusting and not terribly romantic (and seemingly out of character for Dawn who has been captured and tortured and tied up far too many times mostly referenced offscreen the whole Tuesday kidnapping thing for it to be sexually fun...) I see Fred fitting together with Anya a lot better than Dawn therefore... Otherwise good job...
Comments from author:
Eh, they don't end up with her _yet_. No rules stopping them in the future. And at this point, Dawn had been captured perhaps three times, and tortured once.

The sexually fun part is that she was not in any way bound. She could get out whenever she pleased, and it worked between the two.

Thanks for reading.
Review By [fourmenandanelephant] • Date [13 Sep 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from maxthehobbit
Review:
That last chapter threw me for a loop, never saw it coming. I see you left it wide open for a sequel, like battling all the vamps and demons around the hotel surrounding the newbie slayers.
A very original story, good job on the characters and the plot although it sort of ended abruptly.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
Pretty good, although I feel like you wrapped it up kind of fast and a bit too saccharine. I think I needed a fight scene.

It was fun seeing Whistler outmaneuvred for once.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
Pretty good, although I feel like you wrapped it up kind of fast and a bit too saccharine. I think I needed a fight scene.

It was fun seeing Whistler outmaneuvred for once.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
Pretty good, although I feel like you wrapped it up kind of fast and a bit too saccharine. I think I needed a fight scene.

It was fun seeing Whistler outmaneuvred for once.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-six" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
Review:
==The Creator was sitting in a chair next to Buffy, whose mouth was open in shock. "You've talked to my mom?" When she got a nod in response, she muttered, "Great, my mother is on a face-to-face basis with the Creator. This is so not of the good."==

That line alone had me laughing for several minutes
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from deathgeonous
Review:
Wow, this was very good and extremely fun. I do hope that you some day write a follow up to this fic, so thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from lunalurker
Review:
I really love, and need, a happy ending sometimes, and our favorite loving Scoobies are so very deserving.
I adore this story. Well done, and thank you for writing.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
That was really good. I'm crying from the last chapter. Really, that was amazingly written.
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from CPTSkip
Review:
Just reread your whole story. I still think it is unique and kind of kinky, but I enjoyed the heck out of it once again.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from RebeccaAshling
Review:
This is the third time I've read this story (the first two times on IKOLY 2) so I must like it. Not entirely sure why I like it, though. Some things cannot be explained.

For the benefit of other readers here are the various pairings/threesomes/moresomes in story order:

Buffy/Willow
Buffy/Willow/Xander
Fred/Giles
Buffy/Tara/Willow
Dawn/Xander
Dawn/Fred
Cordelia/Xander
Buffy/Danielle/Tara/Willow
Giles/Anya
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
I thought the last Companion was Faith, Vamp Willow never occurred to me.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from CPTSkip
Review:
I enjoyed your odd story a lot. Odd is not a bad thing. Your story had humor, sex, eroticism, a bit of kinkiness, nice characterization, and some very strange twists and turns. For instance, I never in a moment thought of Vampire Willow becoming one of the Companions.

I thought you did a nice job with everyones' characters and somehow you made them all fit together. Your's is one of those rare stories I actually wish you had made longer. Some of the chapters just felt a bit hurried and some of the various relationships could have been more filled in. I would have enjoyed seeing more interaction between all of the Companions. And I don't just mean the sexual relationships. Well, not just the sexual relationships. I still am not sure where the Fred/Dawn kinkiness came from, but I would have loved to have seen more. Lol!

I'm not sure where your story could go from your Happily Ever and Ever and Ever After ending, but I hope the Plot Bunnies come in the night and nibble on your imagination someday with more ideas. Thank you for a funny and delightful story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
*APPLAUSE*
ENCORE!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [17 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-seven" from Cmiller
Review:
Always loved a happy ending.
Comments from author:
I do, too. It's happy for now......at least until I decide if I want them to go once more into the breach.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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