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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin
Review:
Why do I do this to myself? Why do I read excellent stories that haven't been updated for half a decade? *Sigh* here's praying you come back!
Review By [(Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [13 Dec 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DarthTenebrus
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Four years and change since the last update...seems so long ago. There needs to be more.

Oh, and I lived in Monterey for about a year and a half; best place on the Pacific Coast to live in, if you can afford it, but I loved it. Only gets hot like one month out of the year, and the fog each morning is just beautiful. Thick enough that I swore at times that I could just breathe my breakfast lol...just didn't think there was a vamp problem, but with a Slayer and several Jedi in town, the bad guys are gonna be running for the hills!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [6 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from starwolf
Review:
so reviews cause new chapters, well you have a very unique premise going, I like what your doing. this definitely deserves more. so is anikin dead or darth?
great job so far, thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [20 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from fran
Review:
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Review By [fran] • Date [8 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AngelQueen
Review:
Ooh, I like this! So very interesting, having a post-Chosen Buffy meet a post-RotS Obi-Wan and have her introduce him to the wonders of Slayage and all that comes with it! I'm hooked!

It's particularly sad that Buffy is completely estranged from the others (except for Faith). I noticed that Buffy hasn't had a single thought dedicated to Dawn in particular throughout these chapters. She thinks of the Scoobies in general, even mentions that Xander is off in the wilderness in an attempt to forget about Anya's death, but there isn't a single thought of Dawn herself.

I also loved how Buffy was able to get through to Ahsoka. I dare say Buffy has suffered many of the same wounds as the other girl. I kept thinking of the Cruciamentum, and of how Buffy found herself face-to-face with a Giles she'd never seen before, a Giles who actually put something ahead of her. It was a scary thing.

Again, excellent story! Hope you decide to write more for it! :)
Review By [AngelQueen] • Date [4 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Selonianth
Review:
I require you to continue this... and for Buffy to get a Lightsaber... they're too useful for her *not* to get one.

*stares at*
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from bookworm
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This was fun, and looks like a good start on things. Here's hoping your inspiration comes back around to this story at some point. Keep up the good work, whether it's this one or not!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from borgrabbit
Review:
Haiku dirge:

Is the story dead
Be nice to see where it led
Your museā€”has it fled

>^_^<

Yes! Please contemplate continuation, if you are willing.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I HAD WANTED TO SEE EHAT WHOULD BECOME OF
BUFFY'S REFUGEES!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Netchka
Review:
Cool story. Can't wait to read more.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Callista
Review:
Great story, please update? I loved the characterisation and the interactions between Buffy and Obi-Wan...
Review By [Callista] • Date [20 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from CarlislesGirl
Review:
Please Update
Review By [CarlislesGirl] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Great story going on here!! I think having some intergalactic visitors drop in on you is tremendous! And really would appreciate it if the author were able to return and continue writing for it
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from imortis
Review:
been waiting for a new chapter to this, forgot all about it.
Review By [imortis] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from bradsan
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I agree with Buffy, that you have to deal with the feelings inside you.
I never get that as a Jedi you can't feel or show emotion and all the other stuff. the Force is good or bad, no in between. They forget that when you don't let yourself feel and deal with it the balance between good and bad inside the person vanished. Then it's easier to go bad, no rules or anything.

Good story and even better writing. Can't wait for another update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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