Great story going on here!! I think having some intergalactic visitors drop in on you is tremendous! And really would appreciate it if the author were able to return and continue writing for it
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Not Rated
I agree with Buffy, that you have to deal with the feelings inside you. I never get that as a Jedi you can't feel or show emotion and all the other stuff. the Force is good or bad, no in between. They forget that when you don't let yourself feel and deal with it the balance between good and bad inside the person vanished. Then it's easier to go bad, no rules or anything.
Good story and even better writing. Can't wait for another update.
I wasn't sure about whether or not I would like this story when I first saw the summary, but I finally took a chance and read it. I was pleasantly surprised to find that really enjoyed the story. I really like your plot; I think it is very unique, and yet actually works with both fandoms without too much tweaking.
I anxiously await your next update!!
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [11 Sep 10] • Not Rated
“Here I was hoping that you would outgrow talking like a teenager once you were no longer--what’s that word again? Oh yes, a teenager,” Wesley replied as he stood up and walked towards Buffy.
lol
good talk of B with Ahsoka.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated
“Because the Watchers Council basically did the exact same thing you guys do, but with the Potential Slayers. They’d kidnap them, and have a Watcher raise them in isolated areas in the chance that one of them might be Called. The downside to this lovely system: few of those Called ever reached eighteen. Hell, most died before they reached sixteen years old.” “How is this relevant? The Jedi have each other to rely on, while what I’m getting from you is that the girl only has this ‘Watcher’ to rely on.”
I see both their points - hope they can find a happy middle. How many kiddies are there, and how many rooms (and esp bathrooms) has the house?
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated